Oh gosh! This was so sweet and it made me really emotional! At first, I thought it was going to be Harry/Hermione slash but when I read it and realized that it was just a pure beautiful friendship fic it made me love it even more! Wonderful! Spectacular! Love it.

Awwwwww! I love this relationship!

I think you captured their friendship wonderfully. I know the line breaks were used to indicate jumps in time through-out the evening/their lives, so was able to work through them just fine. I might not have used so many, but it was okay to get through (so feel free to ignore that bit if you want). Thank you for sharing.

This was a lovely portrayal of their friendship :)

Awww. So fluffy. I like the idea of Harry and Hermione watching Friends together and eating cake, something so mundane, yet it means so much. I love how you took that quote so literally :D

Although I was a bit confused by so many line breaks. I get it, it's an artistic choice and it's supposed to highlight the events of the night, but I think you might've overdone it slightly, as the story feels a bit disjointed. Fewer segments, or maybe merging a one or two together to make it longer would've worked a bit better, IMHO.

And lastly, I think by 'St. Mungles' you mean 'St. Mungo's', the Hospital for Magical Maladies and Injuries. Also I thought that little bit where he hexed her by accident was really cute.

My god, was that emotional.

I literally cried when I read the ending- you have such a way with words, it cannot be described in a few words.

Yes, Harry and Hermione are meant to be best friends, forever. Screw 'Till death do us apart'. It's 'We'll still be together, even death cannot DARE separate us.'

Well, they can be more than best friends, but it still is amazing how loyal one can become, and how attached, emotionally and physically, one could become to another person.

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