Omg! I actually found myself gasping when Jessie's hand was shot I was that obsorbed in the story! Please tell me you are going to write some more, I would really like to see Grady get his just desserts. And don't worry about your english, hell I know people from England with grammar and spelling skills worse than yourself lol Well done on a brilliant story.

Ally D

Excellent story. Too bad Grady Leer got away, though. A bit unique, that. Usually DM stories always end with the bad guys getting caught and punished. English not too bad, either. Thanks, Beth Palladino

Oh my god ... I didn't read the majority of it, but if I had the attention span I would have. It was great though! It takes alot to hold my attention, and I actually got to the end of this one!

~Chikory

i like the story but i was wondering if ur going to right another? and is steve ever going to fall in love again ? will jess meet some one ? will amanda? please let me no thanks,
shelly

Wow! That's all I can say! What a wonderful story. I couldn't stop reading it! Please write a sequel! Pwease? I have to find out what happened to Leer! Keep writing, you're really good! Oh and I absolutly ADORE Don't Go To Warlock. lol I like pretty much anything with Jesse in it! Ok I'll shutup now.
hope to see more of your writing soon,
iwuvjessetravis
PS: In case ya haven't guessed Jesse is my favorite character. hehe.

The Three Investigators! Woo Hoo! I thought I was the only person in the world who remembered those guys! Thank you, thank you for putting them in your story.

You are really a great writer. So many people say how bad I am, and compared to you, I am the worst writer that I know! And you're German, you know English very well. And I liked the Harveys.

~Scarlet!~

Aww that was a sweet ending to a seriously great story. Brillianto!

Awww, that was great Brain! Isn't that End lovely? And, of course, the rest of the story, too! My God, how are you DOING that? I started liking Leer at some point, he was right, you can never watch enough TV! And never read enough of your fanfiction I might add! Love your writing, Brain, love your wise- and sidecracks und this has definitly been great work again. Und short shank, yay! Great! Grins!(Über dat Georgie unterhalt ich mich mit dir nochmal! *g*) I'm already looking forward to the next story about our fave wise-cracking sidecrack! Simply cool!

Bye, Geo (...) aka Pinky-kiddo

This was one great story. You have so many great idea's and I for one hope that Leer is not gone for good. You had me on the edge of my seat with every word. The ending was perfect and I can't wait to read you next story. Once again congrats on a wonderful story.

This story is absolutely brilliant. It was so sweet, I almost cried, when Mark says, "What's happening to you?" to Jesse when he was unconcious. Please update this soon!

Hi

Very good story. Love to read the next chapter.

Marianne

Yay, Waaaaaaaaatschen! Gods, O love you for that chappy, Brain, I can't become much better...ahem...I mean worse (for Jesse), can it! Poor boy, beaten up and drugged and then they let him sleep on the floor! "Watch out for surfboards, they might kick you!" hahahaha, loved that! And that thing how he gets cranky about that stupid guest...great! Wouldn't we all love to see how Jess's arguing with him? No more fruits for you either, Brain, simply water and bred until the new chapter is done! Can't wait to see what happens! Argh!

Tschö, Geo

Oh what a place to stop. You have an amazing story that I can't wait to read more of. Poor Jesse, you really are writting a great story just like your last one. Please post more soon.

Am enjoying this story from the first to the last sentence. Please don't let us wait too long with such a cliffhanger!

Trotzdem entspannte und fröhliche Weihnachten! :-)