That cliff hanger tho...
i rewlly like the story so far! great! i love that smoker can cook and ace can't xD it fits so good and the way they snarl at each other or bitch at each other is lovely

Whoa. A lot happened in this chapter. Ace is a stripper?!
Well, I think it's hilarious that smoker already has feelings for ace, cauz he's not the kind of guy to like people so easy. Just another reason why they're meant for each other :)

Ohhhh smoker doesn't trust him~
I wonder; is he gonna fall into smoker's arms?

Of course shanks would own a bar XD it's so typical of his character. I can't wait till luffy is introduced to the story, and I can't wait to see how smoker interacts with him.

Awesome start to the story! I love how ace has a grumpy grey cat that he loves regardless of temper (and yet he dislikes smoker's same qualities). ~Forshadowiiinnnnggg~

STAWP KILLING MEH -dying-

Omfg Ace o_o

Aiko: Marcoooooooo! ;-;
Me: -troll face- Polo.

SmoAce is just aaaagggghhhhhh...

Goodie. We are getting to the good parts. :)

I am so happy to find this story. I got to the good part. I cant wait to read more. Excellent story.

Awesome work hope there's more xD

Holy cap wht going to happen wht will happen is smoker and ace going to get together?
Man the Spence is killing me. I hope u update soon. X3

what happens next?