Holy Crap! I freaking loved it! Awesome story!

This was pretty cute, but one note: the words "defiantly" and "definitely" are completely different. There were numerous places you used "defiantly" where I could tell that you meant "definitely".

That was such a sweet story

i didn't stop smiling even once while reading this. i love it so much, it was so cute and charming and just so beautifully written. Defiantly reading again in the future! :}

Yasssss pleaseeeeeeeeeee continue

Thanks for writing this story it was hurindes

hot damn, this as freaking amazing. the first sentence in the first chapter seems to cut off and it threw me off in the beginning, but I'm glad I kept reading. It was adorable and before they know it, they'll be having little pink haired babies with brown eyes.

please write some more i love it they have such a cute relationship

I loved this and I also loved the ending

goooad this was...I LOVE IT

I really love the interaction between Natsu and Lucy in this!

you should really do more chapters for this

Epilogue please! :)

Not bad. I certainly enjoyed it. However, I noticed that you made the same error several times throughout the chapters. The word defiantly means boldly resistant or challenging. You used this word instead of definitely. It's common for this mistake to be made but these words are completely different in meaning. There were a few other grammatical errors but overall it was a good read.

OMFG IM IN LOVE WITH THIS!