I like this story a lot! It's actually given me an idea for a Scorpius one shot! Can't wait to read more :)

Aww that's adorable :) I love the way you've written this! great characterisation and wonderfully written :) Great job!

I like it.

What a dirty little cheat. Although I guess it’s just as bad as Hermione confounding Ron’s competition for keeper. I liked how Albus cheered Scorpius up after that. Shame the school missed out on another Potter-Malfoy Quidditch rivalry, but maybe that’s for the best ;)

I imagine Rose is close to Albus for family relations and not because he’s trying to date her? I feel like Scorpius wondering what Albus had that the rest of them didn’t is a little odd in that context. Unless you’re implying cousincest.

I like the gradual friendship that happens between the pair. It feels very realistic that they’d slowly have this friendship given that they’re in different houses and there’s a lot of bad history between their fathers.

Good job!

THIS. This I love. See, I hate romanticizing Scorpius and Albus together and I love it when other people don't. Their potential friendship is really interesting, though, and I DO love reading about it!

i love it keep it up! :D

I really liked the way you portrayed their friendship here. I like how Scorpius was reluctant but eventually came around. Nicely done! :)

Really Good!