| Reviews for Crossing Lines |
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  Guest chapter 6 . 8/14 Oh no! He is gone again?! did the spell work on her? did she return back? this can't be the end. something could be done to fix this. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/8 It's interesting to see the two aspects of his characters, the good, caring and the bad, ruthless, so it is understandable for Alice to feel confused. Although I think her attraction is a bit early. If he survives the night, does it mean they have changed the past? |
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/3 I have a thousand questions too! I am looking forward to reading more of this thrilling story! |
| UsXed chapter 1 . 9/4/2018 Veri n1c3UIVst0ridj |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2018 Please keep updating this! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/24/2016 Good story, I like it. For future chapters commander is spelt with a C not a K |
| Gray toad chapter 3 . 5/27/2015 Aa! Really cool chapter ! Forward to the continuation! |
| pandora.guerra chapter 3 . 5/23/2015 Continueeee plisssss, ist beatifull |
 Suki.Fictionist chapter 3 . 5/23/2015 Wait! He's alive again? What's with the stone? How powerful is it? And why does he want it no matter how much power the stone has? I have many more questions. I loved this chapter. Please continue. Suki |
| pandora.guerra chapter 2 . 4/23/2015 continueeeeee plis ist beatifull! |
| Dasha chapter 2 . 4/22/2015 Aah! The most interesting place ! What will happen next !? I have assumptions about it)) Great chapter! Forward to continuing! |
| Suki.Fictionist chapter 2 . 4/21/2015 Dum dum dum, what's going to happen next? Will the horseman kill her? Or set her free? Or maybe even keep her? Please update. This was such a great chapter, please update. Suki |
| Dasha chapter 1 . 4/21/2015 Oh, already very interesting! The first chapter is excellent! Update soon! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/14/2015 Very awesome! Update please! |
| pandora.guerra chapter 1 . 4/14/2015 SIGUELE NO LO VAYAS A DEJAR COMO TODOS LOS DEMAS LO AHCE, SIGUELLOOOO YO SI QUIERO LEERLO! |
