oh hell yea! thanks for the new chapter i've been waiting forever for this!

*gasp*
Oh no.

Wait! What!
There was so much there is had gasped like three times in a row!

Hell yah! Hmmmm what would percepror look like as a human? Any thoughts? Anyway great so far I love it

I love Jordan more and more, every chapter.

Come on Starscream, you can do it!
No one wants Shockwave involved.
Kinda shipping Starscream and Jordan now...

OMG,this is absolutely hilarious! I love this story so much...

*throwing tomatoes*

You've been gone HOW LONG?! I've been dying for a new chapter.

But at least you're back. *Carrying a bag of tomatoes and glares at you*

Just in case.

You need to make these chapters longer. There is no ifs, ans, or buts about it, you NEED to make these chapters longer. I need longer chapters of crazy female scientists who send people across the multiverse and blows up the house every other Friday to survive. I NEED IT!

On another note: I don't really like the idea of Prowl and Jazz as a couple. And I don't support slash. But I really like this story otherwise, so if you must have slash in here I kindly ask you to keep it to a minimum. Please? I understand that it's a choice to be homosexual, but it's not the choice that I made. This is probably asking a bit too much, and I'm sorry if I've offended you, but can you please keep it to a minimum? I really do like this story...

Cash is out. Peace!

Lol!

XD I like this story so far. I like how you set it up(along with the pic) and how the characters are. Dem inventions though, but I have to worry of Tyson. With all the info he has of them along with the others that are big fans of the show.
The shout outs of the show are awesome to, Dr. Who and Star Wars fans anyone? (The mental image of a dalek being beaten up by some storm troopers is in my mind now. I literally died a little with Tyson's cosplay of doctor who, I really liked it XD)
I wonder what will happen now. What other plot bunnies will you make and do?
I hope life does NOT get in the way so much for the next funny chapter of this fic that I admire so far.

Here's to hoping the bots go rescue Jordan and Tyson. And Sideswipe should cheer up. Now that he's smaller he can get into even more places he's not supposed to. Can the brig even hold a human? Isn't it built for bots?

...JAZZ IS RUMBLE AND FRENZY's SIRE?!

Go Jordon! Tell him whose boss!
Also, that woman is asking for trouble. Hopefully Starscream's amused instead of irritated and doesn't hurt her.

Oooooh! Starscream just got dissed!

…Wait. What! He's LAUGHING?!