I hope you write a sequel. I fell in love with this story so much!

Is mel pregnant?

Lacey found a boyfriend ?! Oh God… I can't help but pity the man who chose her. But if they're happy… It's okay !
Kyle finaly chose Sunny. That's great. They even had daughters !
Lily found happiness too, that's a relief…
Melanie and Jared got kids too, yeah !
Everyone has a good life now, it's such a good thing !
And the souls didn't try to turn the human children into Souls, that's a good thing.
Aaaah, I think I know what movies Wanda's talking about. _
I googled Aspen Grove and you're right, that's a beautiful place. It's excellent for Wanda and her human community.
Thank you for this wonderful story. I hope you'll write others in the future…

Aaaaah, almost the end !
I can't believe it.
I'm looking forward to it, but I'm also a bit sad.
I always feel like that when I arrive at the end of a great story.
So they're gonna have a boy ? Congratulations !
I'm sure he's gonna be cute…
They're all building a really great place. Although, I'm gonna miss a bit the desert caves… Anyway, they're gonna have plenty of room, good houses and they're all gonna live happily ever after. This is what truly matters.

That’s a little small, so maybe more like 7lbs 5pz

Girl 5lbs 8oz

I don't know for the weight, I'm not an expert for this… Just hope the weight will be correct. It would be horrible if their baby had health problems.
But I would prefer a girl for them. A lovely little girl with either black or blond hair, and either blue or gray eyes (with slight silver sparkles in her eyes).
I can't help but imagine Melanie and Jared having a dynamic son, while Wanda and Ian would have a sweet daughter (not too sweet yet, that would be exagerated). It… fits more with the personality of the two couples.
Anyway, thanks for that new chapter, you published it very fast !

Girl

I forgot to say one thing in my last review : I'd prefer Wanda to have a baby girl. But I wonder… Concerning the baby's eyes… I think they should have some silver sparks. Not a full glowing ring like a real Soul, but just some stars… That would be a sign that the baby has a bit of Wanda's DNA. A proof of her being the mother, not just the body she's using.

Yeah, another chapter ! Thank you !
So, that place seems safe for everyone. I hope it will last.
As Mel said, you never know how much time you'll have.
But it looks like they're gonna have a long and happy time together, like a big and great family.
I wonder if Wanda and Ian will have a daughter or a boy… I have to admit I prefer Connor or Josh for a boy, and Sophie or Carla for a girl…
And it would be great if Melanie and Jared could also have children, if that place is really safe.

"Just talked" ?
Yeah, yeah, I believe him ! LOL !
Anyway, Landon has a strange attitude… He seems to have a crush on Wanda, and yet… Doesn't seem so clear. Anyway, Ian is jealous and Mel… I like her sister part in all this, as usual.
But Cloud Spinner bothers me. She reminds me of Petunia Dursley (her mind, not the physique).

The scene on the rocky ridge with the sunset is so romantic.
And I like Wanda and Ian talking about what would be the life of everyone if the invasion never happened. It's a bit sad, but yet quite nice.
Wanda jealous… That's strangely cute !

I love Mel's ideas about a romantic movie of Ian and Wanda's romantic world-win romance.
Just to imagine Ian scaling the walls of her house and spending the night making up for lost time with Wanda… Awwww, so romantic !
But yet, Jared is right : Mel should take a nap, she seems a bit… off ! LOL !
Poor Ian who thinks he ruined Wanda's life (her life as a Soul, not her human life in the caves).
Anyway, we know Wanda was not happy in the book, before she chose to bring Mel back to her family.
She's really happy now, with human people who love her and her human partner.

That's a great idea to create that special mental bound between Mel and Wanda.
Looks so possible…
And I like when Wanda screams "IAN !" and poor Mel flinches herself because it almost bursted her mental ear-drums. That's funny !

I like when Landon says : "Us weirdo's gotta stick together."
It looks so much like his father, Jeb !
Wanda's familly is getting bigger.