Wow! Awesome idea and really fun to read, loved it.

I for real kinda wanna see this play out in a full fledged story
That would be so cool

This was so much fun to read!

I really hope you consider making this a story after Darkest night it has so much potential

I know you're working on your other story BUT I think you should consider doing something with this one when Darkest Nights is finished. It has a lot of potential.

Extremly well written

OOOoooooo. So exciting !

Wow, just... wow. That was really well written- I loved it.

this is really good, i wish there was more

OOOHHHH...
In some ways I was hoping Slade wouldn't know either and they'd end up talking to each other about their issues (in a vague but still helpful way) whilst actually trapped
This was great but not something I saw coming-cool!

I was referred here from your other fic
I like this idea a lot. (A little more than the one in "Darkest Night", even)
Please continue this story if the urge strikes you, it's a wonderful story!

This story is so good that I'll be dying to read more of it. Your narration is excellent, the plot is decent and I certainly like the 'atmosphere ' of the story. These are exactly what I'm searching for in a fanfiction. All in all, it will be a waste if this remains an one-shot.

This was so good. I really hope that you expand on this and make this into a story!

no slade dammit! all you're out to do is cause my baby pain! Good story! I really hope there's more!

Perfect! Typically prefer chapter stories but this one shot has captured my heart and is a new favorite