Ok I loved it gives you a box of girl scout cookies .. Can't wait till the next story... Will be reading your story's again soon ttfn...

I can't wait to see Part Two. Toddler Duo was believable. I've been around tiny children and they act that way. I might not have seemed like it in my last review, but I do hope Heero and Duo's relationship turns from lust to love. Once Heero has gotten over himself. You've got lots of material worth exploring here.

Can't wait for part 2

Do. I will be interested. Look forward to it.

I hope the epilogue wraps up at least this discovery phase of the story. This feels like Part One in a series, honestly, because we still don't know who bombed the hotel or how Duo will fit himself into life as the heir of an important family. Also, you know Relena isn't leaving it there. Hell, I wouldn't if I was her. Some man uses my body for just needs? Mama don't play that. She has enough spunk in this rendition that I think she would find a way to get even, plus Duo ought to exercise some caution with a Heero who has little enough regard for others that he would take advantage of a delusional girl's fantasy like that. Even if he did feel sorry for it later, he still handled badly.

just read review I remember the frogs creepy would make a good separate story if someonefeels so led and more Duocentric? Oh when it hits poor street kid just how rich he is and blue blooded to boot. Does this make him a prince or just an aristocrat?Cant wait for next this story is awesome! Maybe Relena can grow up a bit now or on lighter note sick her on Wufei it would be

That ending seems rather abrupt. You didn't touch on the public finding out the newest "most eligible bachelor" was the "street rat" Gundam pilot, or Duo (and by proxy Heero) dealing with his new celebrity status.

It's an interesting start, but it feels like you didn't really explore it much.

So. It's the end. God. I am feeling sympathy for Relena. Any plan for future stories? Write a Duo centric crossover. Please

Thanks great story! Loved the shattering of Relenas delusional world hook her up withsomeone else...Dorothy maybe? Still think Jonathans the villain but whatever his motives he'll want Duo out of the picture I bet! Cant wait for more, and Milliardo has a Gundam pilot for a cousin.

"The stick up (Heero's) ass was slowly descending" is in my top three sentences I've read this week, so funny. So it turns out Duo was very nearly going by his own initials all this while. Wait 'til his grandma hears the story about how he got involved in the war. Duo actually flew his father's design? Wicked! Duo and Eliza seem to be gelling pretty well despite having just found each other again. I like Babs. I get that she's supposed to be vapid, but she's amusing about it and she seems to mean well. Have you seen a 'so bad it's great' horror movie called Frogs? This family is reminding me a lot of the Crocketts in that movie. So Duo's mother was a performer? I hope you will get into her story more it seems there is a lot to know there. And I hope that you do go further with Duo and Heero. It's obvious they are at the start of something good. You can fade to black if you don't want to raise the rating but it would be a shame for their relationship to not progress.

I can't wait till the next chapter ,I give you a cookie for this one ..please update again soon... Pats you on the back...

Nice. Espically Relena.

Loving this story! Too obvious withPhillip being perp plot twist maybe Jonathan not so loyal as everyone thinks Poor Grandmama when Duos tragic past gets told the street gangs to the plague and Solo to the Maxwell Church massacre to Sweepers and G ya know getting captured for public execution those three soldiers were rough implied torture Grandma going to seriously spoil her returned Grandson. This could get serious or kept lighthearted or both depending on your muse! As usual well written!

OMG those two chapters were so good I just love this story ... gives you a cookie lol Please update again soon...

That little argument at the end was hilarious. I am looking forward to what will surely be the most awkward breakfast ever.