Wonderfully erotic. Loved it, loved it, loved it!

~TVL~

OKAY OKAY OK AY OAK IAUA SO. OKAY. I'M TRYING TO COMPOSE MYSELF.

OKAY SO. It wasn't quite what I expected (and I'm not sure at all what exactly I was expecting tbh, since you said you didn't really get this ship or their dynamic), but holy fucking hell. IT WAS AMAZING. I'm honestly fucking reeling right now.

Usually, I tend to have Okada and Nakamura's roles reversed since that's mostly my preference, but when it came to this fic I didn't even care, just as long as I got my two dudes fuckin' and one choking the other and you gave me that and more, and I honestly couldn't be happier (or more fucked up) right now.

Parts I especially liked were,

"He didn't know if Nakamura meant to worship him or devour him." - to which I greedily thought, BOTH!

"He liked when Nakamura's teeth grazed his neck and made sparks rain through his nerves" - I can only assume you purposely worked in the word "rain" and I loved it and it was perfect regardless of anything.

"The cycle continued, each time fantastically brighter, until Okada came, feeling like he shattered into a million crystal shards and floated from himself, so far gone he barely noticed Nakamura coming, too, as loud and frantic as it was." - In general I just love the vivid descriptions of the sensations Okada was feeling. Love, love, love.

God, and I adored so much that afterwards, Nakamura had Okada wrapped tightly in his arms. Oh man, that fucking got me too. So ideal.

Lastly, I CAN'T STOP THINKING ABOUT WHAT NAKAMURA WAS MUMBLING INTO OKADA'S NECK. It's driving me and one other person a little nuts cause we're like "wHAT IS IT? WHAT DID HE SAY?!2?#?#?#" It's fucking us up in a very good way.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS. I HONESTLY CAN'T THANK YOU ENOUGH. I LOVED IT MORE THAN ANYTHING ELSE YOU'VE EVER WRITTEN. (This coming from someone who is still such Ambrollins trash.)

I don't know much about the NJPW boys (other than names and what they look like), but I like you and your writing. You always manage to describe the surreal sort of psychology that can happen during sex, specifically on the bring of orgasm.

You also make breath play sound awesome. I like my throat being held during sexy times, but never to the point of breath play for safety reasons, but man, I imagine that hazy sort of feeling is really cool.