You know...it has been a good long while since I've read any new YYH fics...and I can say this was wonderful in every way. Hiei's dialogue was PERFECT. Flawless. Very rarely does anyone write him correctly, and you hit him spot on. I could SEE the whole thing play out. I haven't faved a YYH fic (that wasn't written by a friend, that is lol) in...I wanna say at least 3 years. This deserves so much more. Thanks for reviewing my Orange Lights cuz it brought me to this. Much love :3

Ah! The feels!

I so love fics where colder/angrier/sterner characters are put in a fatherly position! Hiei's as adorable a dad as Hibari is!

This was so cute! I really enjoyed reading it!

Thanks for sharing! :)

Hiei looks yummy as main ingredient in my next meal.

Aw love it. Always new he was a softy in there some were.

Same real life Demon that Vegeta from DBZ and Levi from Attack on Humanity is based on.
Hiei as well.
You humans must be brain dead to not get it by now.
You are not coming up with these story ideas.
They are forced into your mind by the Demon World.

I liked your story. I think Hiei's relationship with Mae is cute. I can totally see him as a dad and I know he'd be a good father.

AWWWWWW that's so cute

I really enjoyed this story, even though it was short. I hope you write a continuation with Hiei and Mae!