"Make love to me Toby" - Love this line. Wish we can hear this in an episode of Scorpion.

Absolutely breathtaking writing captured.
Please continue to write more about Scorpion Fiction.
Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

Love love love. Steamy and sexy. This is the way Quintis should be. Please keep writing. Love your fanfictions.

Beautiful romance. I loved it.

Fantastic fantastic !

All Together now:

AWWWWWWWW!

Another Fantastic Ficlet my friend. Erotic, and quite Intense, But soft, Sensual, Sweet And, in my Opinion, Tasteful, and Believable. It again would be great to see it in the Series. Regardless, Righteous job. Thanks a Bundle for posting.

Dan F

Great work! I really enjoyed how you gave equal importance to the "sentimental" and the "physical" part, and I think you described them really well, you kept them in character.
Please keep writing Quintis, I promise I will read it all (and maybe do some other review, too ;-) )

U should make one like this, but with Walter and Paige.