You made a contradiction on one part here. You wrote that kagari was patting Lucia's head in one part as their latest addtion to the familia but in the later part, she said they will eventually find Lucia if they ask around.

Ugh bell has rewrite ability.

Nice story. I haven't read this before the rewrite (no pun intended) so I don't have a clue on how bit was written before.

I liked how the story progress. Lol, Lucia scene reminds me of he tai koutarou. The whole pochi naming is a bit confusing. I'm fine with him being pochi but it confuses me of who's whom.

Oh hey you updated this, thanks. Wish there were more individual interaction with the girls and Kotarou but this is good too. Hope you update soon. Thanks for the nice read.

Okay, you make me want to re-read Terra and cried again

It's praiseworthy, but inaccessible to readers not familiar with Rewrite.

Good chapter! I managed to stop myself from rereading Rewrite previously (had exams coming, so I just had to), but now that I am relatively free nothing can stop me!
So Bell is like Terra-Kotarou in this? In regards to Rewrite ability, I mean. Though, I can't really see the difference between them, except that the one from before Moon had Aurora as his second skill and the one from after the Moon (Terra) had Blood Manipulation instead. Which transformed into Aurora in the end, too.
If you think about it, even though it was said that Kotarou used his own lifeforce in Terra route to rewrite himself, it wasn't all that different from previous routes. I mean, in the end the outcome of overusing Rewrite is the same - you become a familiar. Or did Terra-Kotarou rewrite himself into familiar out of his own free will? I mean, not like the Kotarou from the beginning, who came closer to being a familiar each time he rewrote himself, but instead Terra-Kotarou was steadily using his own lifeforce the whole time while all the time remaining fully human, only in the very end transforming his body into that of a familiar using the last portion of his lifeforce. It wasn't like he had much to lose, as a human he would have died in a few minutes anyway, so he gave himself time by transforming into a familiar. A plausible theory, I think.
By the way, is Moon-Kagari still alive? I remember that Kotarou and others found a small plant on the moon (which meant that moon still had some aurora, I think), so I thought it meant that she could still be alive.

Rewrite fics are a rarity, and crossovers even more so. And the story is quite good... Damn, why did I have to read this?! Now I won't be satisfied unless I go and read Rewrite again, especially Moon and Terra routes. Still, please continue writing. Like I said, the story is quite interesting. A question though: which Kagari is it, Moon or Terra? And whichever one it is, will the other one make an appearance?
P.S. Need more Rewrite fics!

It's been a long time since I've read the Moon and Tera routes. You might have just caused me to reread all of Rewrite, not that is a bad thing. I'll keep my eye on this, looking forward to it.

Going to need to check out the Rewrite manga. I remember reading a bit of it but not enough to get a general understanding. Maybe need to wiki the vn to get the clear picture too. Bell is already (potentially) strong enough with his Single Minded Pursuit skill, it's scary if you give him the Rewrite power. I hope you have Kotarou interact with the other familias, namely Loki, both in town and in the dungeon when you continue this.

Congratulations on having the first listed DanMachi crossover, no idea if there are other crosses.