It was a nice gender-unknown until the father thing.

I hate your stories so far, yet I love them. They're always so sad/bittersweet.

Aah. This was also very nice. Kinda like a nice cake that goes well with the bitter coffee from earlier. Aah, I just want to hug Robin and tell him it'll be fine soon enough.

Oh my god. My heartstrings. My whole heart. Aaahh, this was beautiful. So absolutely, heart-wrenchingly beautiful. Ahh. Aaaah. Ah. The Robin-Lissa family has always been my favorite, even if I prefer other supports for M!Robin. The whole family just meshes really well together. Seeing Morgan die and Owain's reaction to it...well, it hurt but it was so beautiful I didn't care. And it just got better (worse) from there. That bit with Morgan bringing Robin out of the void, man, that right there is great narrative. Good job on this, man. Totally going into my favorites.

beautiful fic starring my favorite waifu.

I guess that is what happens if morgan is in a non combat class lol.

and NO ONE TOUCHES MY DAUGHTER.

I'm not going to lie here, I was crying so much while reading this. It might have helped that I already have preexisting love for Morgan but it was really well written.

perfectly done. made me come within a millimeter ofcrying at times.

After reading your other story I was interested to see anything else you may have written, so found this and, yeah really enjoyable, very gripping story.

You've kept it tight, telling the story in enough detail but not getting bogged down in the misery. I'll say, the wait until the future children realise who the deceased was, was excruciating. Then Owains speech about wanting them all to be together, just so very painful.

And as he says, not a heroes death. She survived a ruined world to die in a "peaceful" one. Poor gal.

I did laugh a bit when Robin tells Naga he's aware he'll die when it seems very clear he hasn't (although I may have misread that)

A minor complaint I suppose would be that it'd have been nice for Robin to actually consider his sacrifice; ie. That just after losing his sister Owain would lose his father. For the best or not (and don't get me wrong I think the sacrifice is the best choice) he is giving up his family.

But that's pretty minor, so ultimately, all good things on the story front! Really nice interaction with Robin and Lissa too. Not a pairing I usually enjoy but you showed it really well. One of, if not the best version of the pairing I've read at least.

This work was beautiful. It took me through a rollercoster of emotions, and it was written incredibly well. I was really feeling the mood.
Keep up the good work! 3

I feel like my heart has been crushed. How dare you. D:

(Good job, btw)

I'm crying this was so beautiful. I love the way you right, and the passion that you put in to it. Keep it up!

Cute fluff.

What a great story. FE:A is one of my favorite games and this story does it justice! The characters are written very well, and the reveal of Morgan is heart-wrenching! Great job! (ps. this story has inspired me to do another FE:A playthrough, so thank you for that!)

Very good fic! Thanks for putting this up, I thought the ending in particular was quite good :)

Well, you told me you were working on something FE:A oriented... this was a punch to the gut...

Wasn't expecting the M!MU/Lissa pairing - that's always nice to see. I don't think it's shipped much. At least not by me..!

The way the reveal is done with regards to Morgan's true identity is the best part of this story, and utterly gripping. I think it would have been neat for Robin to dwell a bit more on his failure to help Morgan especially once he finds out her true identity - in his conversation with Lissa post-funeral, for example, I can't help but feel he is a bit chirpy considering he's just consigned his (surprise) daughter to the casket, and it might have been neat to see more contrast with his "I like to feel I can protect you" phrase from Lissa. That's pretty subjective, though. I think it's hard to accurately reflect how Robin would feel about someone he found for about 10 seconds.

The ending was good - I see what you were trying to get at here with the Morgan-theme, but again I think it needed a tiny bit more tying in, it feels there is a blank bit in between where Robin is all 'oh hey it's cool wait omg I'm dying morgan pls ;_;' Again, subjective, that's just my take :)

The time-skip scene with Owain is a bit confusing; I'm sure this could flow better structurally within the story, I had to reread this bit to see what you were trying to convey!

Anyway... I hope you don't take my comments as overly negative, as I do like this story a lot, and as I said, the true strength is in the surprise reveal and ending, which I feel you carried off very well. So well done, and it's got a nice tone of finality-ambiguity to it, as well as a decent plot which writers such as myself seem to go to any length to avoid. :)