Thanks for sharing your writing talent!

Yikes!

Thank you for sharing.
Loved this so much.

Haha.
Loved it.
So funny.

Baby steps.
Loved Charlie and Edward's little talk.

They need each other so much right now.

Glad he saved bella.
Know he needs to go get his girl.

Oh yeah, now that's how you do it.
Go Edward.
All those cops against the one detective.
Yeah good detective.
Edward got what you couldn't.
And he got more time.
But he kind of also showed his hand to Phil.

Can't blame him for taking so long.
Hes a bit distraught right now.

Yeah, had a feeling he would freak.
Bella has Edward and Charlie in common.

Yep had a feeling he would show his face.
Edward is going to go mental.
Wonder if Johnny was in on it before or of he was just a coincidence.

So sweet.
I just melted.

I want to hug him.
Love Charlie even more for what he did.
That's why he isn't worried about Edward.
He knows the whole truth.
I just have a horrid feeling Dwyer is gonna rear his head and come for bella.
I can see why Edward now wanted to be a cop and why he respects Charlie so much.

Love Charlie.
Oh man.
Tanya really couldn't take a hint.

Well, Charlie can't say anything. He told her to do stuff.
See Edward still has his bad boy image.