Reviews for Hybrid Mystery Dungeon: Hybrid University
Adamfics chapter 3 . 1/20/2017
And slowly you come to realise
It's all as it should be
You can only do so much

If you're game enough
You could place your trust in me

For the love of life
There's a trade off
We could lose it all
But we'll go down fighting

And what of the children?
Surely they can't be blamed
For our mistakes?

And slowly I've come to realise
It's all as it should be

That hiding space
A lonely place

How can the right thing be so wrong?
I've found mistakes
Where they don't belong

For the love of life
We'll defeat this
They may tear us down
But we'll go down fighting

Won't we?
Foxie4Evs chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
Pretty good so far. I'll go ahead and make 2 OCs
First and Last Name: Velvet Maya

Age: 18

Gender: female

Hybrid. Purrloin

Personality: very spoiled and wants to be the queen of everything. Bossy and very racist. Likes being popular and hates learning.

Appearance: red hair with a purple streak. Curvy body shape. Blue eyes.

Casual Clothing: black mini skirt,black high heels and purple tank top.

Night Clothing: Black nightgown

Swim Clothing: purple bikini

Willing to do embarrassing dares/bets/games yes

If yes to the last question, Underwear: lacy black underwear

What is looked for in a friend: someone who is popular and rich and born in the hybrid world

Sexuality: straight

What is looked for in a romantic interest: someone who is rich, athletic,hot and born in the hybrid world

How did they get into the hybrid world: born into (and very proud of it)

Skills:um...flirting...that's about it

Dorm or home: Dorm

Classes: history,art,gym,math and science

Anything else you feel is important: she comes from a family of only born in the hybrid world so she only dates and befriends other born in hybrid world

First and Last Name: Scarlet Maya

Age:18

Gender: female

Hybrid: Eevee,pidove

Personality: Very shy,sweet and clumsy. She hates her sister but is never mean to her. She's not racist since she is a freak. She also hates her parents who call her a disgrace because she doesn't care about hybrids being born in or not and is a freak

Appearance: short red hair,blue eyes, long and thick eyelashes

Casual Clothing: pink t-shirt, jeans, blue sneakers with black laces and a denim jacket

Night Clothing: light gray t-shirt and black pajama bottoms

Swim Clothing: purple bikini with dark gray coverup

Willing to do embarrassing dares/bets/games no

What is looked for in a friend: someone who is sweet and will not judge her

Sexuality: straight

What is looked for in a romantic interest: caring and always looking out for her and not trying to control her. Also she would prefer someone at least kinda cute but she doesn't really care

How did they get into the hybrid world: Born into

Skills: cooking,poetry,fencing

Dorm or home: dorm

Classes: Gym,language arts,math,art

Anything else you feel is important: she's twin sisters with Velvet( you probably already figured that out but just in case)
Foxwolfrain chapter 1 . 6/18/2015
First and Last Name: Zoe Ashville

Age: she thinks she's around 17

Gender:female

Hybrid: venipede

Personality: A loner who tries to act tough. Very rude and feels sorry for people who get bullied. Not popular and is terrible at making friends but always stands up for those who are being bullied. Is also a fan of drugs.

Appearance: Short, spiky black hair, black eyes,tall and has an athletic body type.

Casual Clothing: plain white t-shirt, leather jacket, skinny jeans and black combat boots

Night Clothing: A purple tank top and black pajama bottoms

Swim Clothing: dark purple one piece and black cover up

Willing to do embarrassing dares/bets: no

What is looked for in a friend: someone caring tough and determined

Sexuality: none at all

What is looked for in a romantic interest: not a fan of romance just good friend
Story: lived with abusive parents and spoiled younger sister. Was beaten to death by parents.
Skills: is very fast and able to go without food or water for weeks, very adaptable and able to withstand large amounts of pain
Dorm or home: dorm
Classes: history science,gym, art and math(skips classes often)
Anything else: Just in case there is any school dances/other special events she wears a black sleeveless dress and neck less with a purple gem.
Duskzilla chapter 3 . 6/14/2015
Glad to see you update again. I was wondering why you took so long. I hope you remembered I sent an OC in earlier. If not just look back for my earlier review. Hope to see more. Till then this is Duskzilla signing off.
SmilingPrince chapter 3 . 6/12/2015
This was a great chapter and we learned a little bit about the legendary Dialga hmmm it makes sense a stoner would be come Dialga.
Ok i have a question
What about Palkia, how does someone become a palkia?

What are the goal of a white hand?

What is a hybrid life like?
Ckbrothers chapter 3 . 6/12/2015
Hmm, how does life as a hybrid work here? And what's to feared? 10/10 and I'm glad you're back! Nice info chapter! Welp I'm out, Byez!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
Age:Magnes Amaratsu Age:15 Gender:Male Hybrid:Charmeleon and Ampharos Appearance: looks like a chameleon with ampharos patterns and colors with a red gem on its tail instead of a flame Casual Cloths: black blazer blue short black pants red sneakers Night Cloths: white shirt yellow shirt Swim Cloths: black tanktop cyan shorts Willing to do any embarrassing dares/bets/games:no What is looked for in a friend: trust and loyalty Sexuality:Straight What is looked for in a romantic interest: truth and honesty How they got into the hybrid world: he was about to die by a gyrados attack he tried to ask his best friend for help but he laughed and left him there to die Skills: Great Cook good at art good at singing Dorm or Home: Dorm Classes: Art music gym the is up to you
Fnaf Marionette chapter 3 . 6/11/2015
Yay! Also, you should add in a school dance.
Ckbrothers Tres chapter 2 . 4/14/2015
Crap, I hit review early! So. So sorry! Stupid phone! Um, anyway, the Damsainx fic is really less than 100 years before the original but I messed that up. Welp I'm out and I failed, again, sorry. Welp I'm out. Byez!
Ckbrothers Dos chapter 2 . 4/14/2015
Double reviewing because I have a question: What other HMD is it close too? Is it closer to the original, Ultraviolet Ninja's HMD 2000 years after the original, Damsainx's one which is possibly less than 10 years or so before the original
SmilingPrince chapter 2 . 4/12/2015
Awesome chapter and really good job with my oc, huh that's cool that to know that there are five types of hybrid. Can't wait to see what you got in stored for this story
Blue Ace 20th chapter 2 . 4/12/2015
Not bad, I like this so far. Keep up the good work.

-Blue Phoenix 20th
Duskzilla chapter 2 . 4/12/2015
Interesting idea. I think I'll help out again. This one is a bit more different.
Name:Jill Willa
Age:18
Gender:Female
Hybrid:Wigglytuff
Personality:Fun loving, extremely social, lazy, caring, loving, emotional, okay with freaks, against drugs
Appearance:Due to a condition in her time as a human she developed much larger then normal. She stands at 7'4 with long curly pink hair, blue eyes, a big M cup chest, huge rear, wide hips, big thighs, Wigglytuff ears and tail
Casual Clothing:Varies. Favorites are pink t-shirts with colorful patterns, jeans and pink sneakers with white laces
Night Clothing:Pink and white bunny patterned pajamas
Swim Clothes:A blue and green swimsuit
Embarassing stuff:As long as its nothing sexual
Underwear:Pink bra and panties
Friends:Sweet and kind people who don't mind her enormous size
Sexuality:Straight
Romantic Interest:A guy who likes her for more then her body
How did they get into the hybrid world:She use to live in the real world as a employee at a music store. One day while she was working the store was robbed and tried to stop it. She was shot through the skull and bled out.
Skills:Music, Art and Cooking
Dorm or home:Dorm
Classes:Math, science, history, art, music and cooking. If this is too much have it so she swaps between classes each day.
Anything else:I know she's big but I wanted to try something unique. I hope it isn't a big problem no pun intended.
Ckbrothers chapter 2 . 4/12/2015
Hm. 10/10 but it seems like every Zoroark is called Evan. Odd, isn't it? Anyway, Mr. Ub-whatever feels to me like a lazy jerk teacher for some reason but I don't know why. (I really hate those kind of people, selfish..jerk..guys.) George go deal with that. Politely please.
George: um, ok I guess. I'm not really sure If it can work. You aren't the author after all!
Me: sh-shut up George. Anyway, great chapter, seems pretty cool and I can't wait for the next. Welp I'm out, Byez?
Damashii chapter 1 . 4/12/2015
First and Last Name: Rylan Z.

Age: 22

Gender: Male

Hybrid: Gallade

Personality: Serious and calm. He always pays attention and is quite educated. He has no real opinion on the multi-hybrids.

Appearance: Stands at 5'7". Crimson Red eyes. Slightly pale skin color.

Casual Clothing: Black long sleeve that connects with black fingerless gloves,( meaning the gloves are part of the long sleeve.) light grey sweatpants, emerald green shoes and open jacket(has no hood and is short sleeved) with gold-yellow edging.

Night Clothing: Casual wear, only minus th jacket and shoes.

Swim Clothing: Black skintight t-shirt and green swim shorts.

Willing to do embarrassing dares/bets/games: No.

What is looked for in a friend: N/A. He is more of a loner.

Sexuality: Straight, but has no attraction to the female gender, as he prefers to be alone.

What is looked for in a romantic interest: N/A.

How did they get into the hybrid world: Died from a gun fight.

Skills: Able to see through deception. Very good with firearms(not that it will do him any good now), and weapons in general. Quite fast in movement and thinking. Amazing eye-hand coordination.

Dorm or home: Dorm.

Classes: History. The rest is your decision.

Anything else you feel is important: You don't want to get into a fight with him, you will end up losing.
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