Right in the feels... :"(

Please write more of this fic is awesome I've read some other gray stories by you and they were great

I'll admit that it was a little odd to have some random person's POV in here, but I think it worked out alright. And I also have a habit of enjoying having a sort of "outsider's perspective" on the relationship between these two, so that's probably why I didn't mind as much as I thought I would. Gray and Natsu's conversation was heartbreaking but really well done, and that last line was gold. Terrible, angsty gold.

To be honest, I'm kind of glad (that sounds wrong x.x) that Gray died, not just because I love angsty and tragic things, but because I think that this particular story and plot called for it. Kudos for not chickening out and opting for an HEA that didn't really fit.

Good job : )

I have read all your stories and I absolutely LOVE your writing. Please continue to write stories about Fairy Tail. You and Poketail are my FAVORTIE writers EVER. So pretty please write more stories.

I didn't think you'd actually kill him! :D But I won't hold that against you. You conveyed their feelings properly and I really felt the Natsu and Gray's pain. Kudos to you!

Don't tell me he died...please don't tell me he died...
*reads the last line and drops nearly dead*
I love-hate you right now, you know that?
First, I absolutely adore Drama and tragedy, especially D&T that's able to make me cry (because I'm just that M :D) but...but your fic did more than just make me cry...it shattered me completely. Awesome writing, really but...WHYYYYYY? *breaks down sobbing*

I love it. I love it. Haha! Its great x

So sad!

Can't wait for the next chapter :""( I reread this so many times already
Brilliant job~

awesome! I am twisted guy who likes to see his favourite character in pain...so obviously I liked it beyond words..I will definitely favourite it.:)

You did it again, a great story/ one shot. I like the idea of seeing trough someone elses eyes whats going on with those two.
Also you just had to kill him, huh? It does make this story better, at least thats what I think.

Good job like always

Just Me

Wow, well that was sad... Good writing though, but still really sad...

You made a great work with this. I always wanted to read a story about how another person sees Natsus and Grays friendship.

You had to kill him. WAAAA! Why'd you kill him, poor Gray. I wish there was more of this. Loved it! XD

Gr-gray! You killed him! Ummmmm I can't blame you...'cus I myself do it most of the time XD
I wonder how you can think such amazing plots...? Do you have a writing fairy that helps you? If yes then please send her to me once in a while too!
P.S. Happy belated Birthday! ( )