Beautiful story and great ending
Thank you.

I really enjoyed this sweet lob ed story it really pulls on the romantic side of my nature.

Hi...so uh, your story brought me to tears, in the best way possible of course. And I feel like anybody who can make another human being feel so strongly by just reading words through a screen has a talent that very few people in this world have. So I just wanted to thank you, and that if you ever read this, be proud. Be prions and continue whatever path you are on. Just, please, don't give up in this one, the one where you made a sad girl happy. So yeah, that's it. Thank you, again.

beautiful

Congrats on writing such a lovely story. Great ending too.

Wow. That was very very good. I loved it. A lot.

This is absolutely amazing! So glad I read this! I got a little emotional at the end!

Great ending! Out of all the Fanfics I've ever read, I'm okay with this ending. Usually when I read the last chapter, I'm crying but this was perfect in its own way.

Loved the story! Watching Tris and Tobias grow together and figure out their relationship was a lot of fun because you wrote it all so well. Definitively going to check out anything else you may have written. Huge thumbs up!

Lovely ending!

OMG I loved this story it was so different I loved how you ended it but I would love to see a sequel maybe of when they have kids etc... but very well done you a brilliant writer:)

definitely a lovely story. Best wishes to you in your next piece.

to be expected with an age gap like they have and as young as they are. a very mature decision from Tris. hopefully, they can come together.

oh the awkward first phone call. hopefully he's not called away on assignment.

oh dear... welp, plenty of fish in the sea and a new waterway to explore! It's a little shocking that Tobias would expect her to give up Broadway. And what a way to ruin what should have been an amazing night, she won a Tony!