| Reviews for Butterfly Kisses |
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TheSnowflake18 chapter 1 . 3/28/2019 Dis is sooooo CuUuUuUUuuUUUUttee! I so wish this would've happened in the show! |
FleksAndru chapter 1 . 10/15/2017 Really cute |
Emma chapter 1 . 7/2/2017 Absolutely amazing! I loved every bit of it! |
Azlyn chapter 1 . 4/15/2017 This was great! I have always had a hard time finding good Starco fanfictions but this one was absolutely adorable and well written! You did a really good job! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2017 This was sooo cute |
starcois4life chapter 1 . 4/1/2017 I am very surprised by this fanfiction. I was not expecting something like this. I really liked it and I really hope that you make a second part to it and continue with it. I love her wings too. They are detailed and I can picture them well. |
I'mInk chapter 1 . 3/30/2017 This was cute, in character, and nice to read. I like your ideas on the different kinds of wings on Mewni! |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2017 this story was really good |
M.A333 chapter 1 . 2/8/2017 BLOOP. BOOP. DOOP. |
taylorluvsPJO chapter 1 . 1/3/2017 This was so good! |
Luna chapter 1 . 1/1/2017 Honestly tho… this should be an episode. It makes to much sense to NOT be cannon. This would be how their first would happen! |
Masshiro-Ni chapter 1 . 12/15/2016 Your dialogue is a bit stilted, any you suffer from a case of telling vs. showing. There's also the matter of the premise being a little poorly developed; the reader would benefit more from knowing that Star has been behaving strangely before Marco brings it up to his father. The story isn't bad, but the flow of the narrative definitely leaves something to be desired. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2016 This was amazing! I legit was crying bc of how Marco was to her3333 |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2016 That was so good! I really enjoyed it well done! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2016 That was really sweet:) |