The ending felt like i was reading romeo and juliet..

PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER IM DYING PLEASE I LOVE THIS IT CAN'T END LIKE THIS

I am truly shocked by this story. I love Puckabrina, but this was shocking! Don't get me wrong, the storytelling was okay, but "Don't you just love evil Puck?"?! No! Some girls are actually treated like Sabrina is! Nobody, nobody, should be forced to do something they aren't comfortable with. Some of these scenes are disgusting! Rape?! Doing THAT at age 11! You aren't ready. At all. Plus, Sabrina would NEVER do that! This is twisted and awful! This story made me shudder. I know this story isn't true, but still!

You did some good things, like being...well...original, and I applaud you for that, but otherwise, I seriously am wondering why you wrote this. Your other story that I read was actually pretty good.

I know that you may not see this review because you have so many, but please take it into account if you do.

You truly have potential to be a great author.

Alex

WOW!
This fanfic is So detailed, you can REALLY picture the settings, bravo!

i'm disgusted with this fic.

love evil puck? are you crazy? this is disgusting (this scene, not your writing)

Shouldn't there be a second story? If Puck's dead, they should be together now! They'd have a happy little ghost family! And I just heard myself...wow...okie. But...the ending, it killed me. I loved it, but I hated it. Beautiful story!

Oh my God... I never read M stories, but I'm glad I did. I STARTED CRYING WHEN I READ THE LAST SENTENCE, OHMYGOD I'M DYING. Why would you do this to me? I-I loved this... I must go cry now...
-Z

Goodness gracious. I just wanted to let you know, this is one of the most amazing pieces I have ever read, and believe me, I have read a lot of great fanfiction and a generous amount of fanfiction in general. This story had me on my toes, laughing, crying, and smiling. I even read it twice. The ending made my emotions run wild. Gosh, I felt like I was on my period my emotions were so crazy. But fear not darling, this is a good thing. Your story has touched my heart like nothing else has ever done. Also, do you do requests by any chance? I would love to request an idea. Your fellow author,
~Ni-Senpai

My, my. This was pure greatness, and I was shocked my Daphne's fate, as well as Puck and Sabrina's. I guess I just hate to love this fanfiction. (;

I CANT STOP CRYING WHYYYYYY

Why did you have to make it so sad? On a literary level it makes perfect sense, but come on. (Very well written).

this is ooc in every way and there is no magic or everafters.

die in hell's flames.

UM IF PUCK IS DEAD THAT MEANS HE CAN BE WITH SABRINA, AND THAT MEANS I NEED ANOTHER STORY NOW.