I really enjoy this one! I'd love a new chapter but I get it if you wanted to stop, thank you for writing it this far!

oooh wow the heart strings have been tugged mightily
so Stork has some kind of even-further-back-past that really messed with him and now he is liable to snap and go ballistic in self defense and that's the source of his self-loathing
and yet he's finding himself less willing to die than it first appears and he's ignited protective instincts for the first time and damn if that doesn't explain so much of the present day dynamic
methinks Piper was more accurate than she'd have liked when she said he wouldn't live without them, i'm guessing that with Maple apparently...gone Stork has probably hinged a lot of his mental health on his desire to make sure the kids are ok...and that's probably eased at least some over the years (ill need to see more of present day to know how much) but i'd honestly be shocked if that wasn't at least partially what you were going for here!
aaaand now i'm worried sick about him being pushed to 'snap' over something in present day...that won't be pretty, but this fic is definitely swooping into angst territory so I wouldn't be surprised if that's a big part of the plots development...

well damn...that was entertaining as hell, and ended on an incredibly sweet moment, even after all the smaller sweet moments like the girls and Finn giving Piper advice, and Starling rescuing Stork, and everyones time at the festival
this fic just keeps getting more and more enjoyable!

Loving the work, please keep updating. Would hate not to know how this story ends up :)

Awww Stork baby, I want to just hug the poor baby. I believe it was worth the wait, love it.

Cant wait for the next chapter. I think i might have cracked a rib reading last chapter i laughed that much, it normally takes me a lot a make me laugh.

Where oh where has our Piper gone? I bet I can guess..but I won't so that's good.. Nice chapter, poor Maple though, and Stork..

Stork..hahaha :) Always knew you were a softy, :D

This is pretty good..make that awesome! Blinking awesome, please update this soon!

This story is amazing. I'm really hoping for Stork/Starling in this story. Stork has always been my favorite on the show. It goes to show he does care for his misfit family and those he calls friends, he just doesn't want to show it in most cases.

First: ha, Piper..don't worry Stork is Stork, and Aerrow is just clueless...XD

Second: Totally Stork there..with the kittens!

Third: Keep writing, it's getting more and more..awesome as I read it!

I really like this! You caught each character's personality traits and quirks so well, it was like watching a spinoff series made by the creators! Question, is Stork's locket thing related to the story of cravina and the gentle stone? It would make a great partner/sub plot :D

It's not all bad, maybe the present tense you use throws people off a little, but still it's a really funny and engaging story, so don't give up hope. -Plus the fact Finn is written very well, everyone's in character, and Stork..is well just Stork, so keep at it, and if you have any questions feel free to PM.

I like it. Don't be discouraged. Storm Hawks hasn't gotten the attention it deserves in awhile. That's all