Reviews for Harry Potter and The Immortals
StoneTheLoner chapter 9 . 7/2
That entire Bogart scene was very contrived. I already felt like it was a stretch when Molly screamed not realizing it was just the bogart and caused Czes to see Claire. But I was fine with it. It was "Claire's" first real appearance and I'm sure him alone would've caused all kinds of questions. So I was more or less excited. But then it happened again... And again... Tbh you pushed that scene way too far. Like I said, I stopped believing in and feeling the scene and instead starting feeling what you were doing was too obvious, how convenient this sequence of events was, asking why did you have to push your luck so far, etc. That's obviously not a good thing so I have the rate the scene and everything that develops from it a 2 out of 10. This was seriously the lowest point of your fanfic.

Next time when a scene hinges on 4 or possibly even 5 different layers of "luck" think about not writing the scene. Or at least not without reworking it.
Trixie1029 chapter 12 . 5/18
Hello! It's been a while since I thought of this story, but once I did, I just knew I had to reread it! And I still love it! The mystery arc in the 50s is so much fun and I'd completely forgotten the details, so watching everything come together was so exciting. It's such a tight arc (I guess is the word?) with tantalizing reveals in every chapter! Minerva's friendships with the Immortals is amazing to watch, and I love the respect that goes both ways .

And the current day plot is so much fun! The Americans shaking everything up is amazing, but probably a big train wreck waiting to happen, but in the best possible way.

But also now Lupin working for the Americans? Hah! That sounds amazing and fun!

Thank you for writing all that you have so far. Your worldbuilding is so fun and I adore the relationships between the characters. Thank you again!
Vampireking40 chapter 12 . 11/7/2019
Anything more to come and is it going to be a Toad free year at Hogwarts with no High Inquisitor taking over the school.
Guest chapter 12 . 5/23/2019
Well well well, what can I say except that i am TOT in love with ya story. But no update since 10.2018 ? I certainly hope you're not gonna stop this! Pleaseeee! Looking foward for an possible continuation.
Harihi
Guest chapter 12 . 5/2/2019
Love this. Can't wait for the next chapter
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 12 . 2/13/2019
A great story here so far!
zekses chapter 9 . 12/15/2018
So far - very decent. Firo is perhaps too hotheaded reagrding the newspaper but overall I really like the autor's take on integrating Baccano's characters in HP verse
KuroHinata chapter 6 . 12/1/2018
Dumbledore and his minions doesn't know how to use intelligence report or information. they don't utilize them at all or erase them from getting out which fucking doesn't do anything but kill them one by one. what they hell did they waster their time, money, magic and life for?
Monoyoshi chapter 12 . 11/1/2018
Thank you for updating your story I have been waiting for this.
Argonaut986 chapter 12 . 10/30/2018
YEHAW, Harry got off, and goes back to Hogwarts!
ellainaparker chapter 12 . 10/28/2018
awesome
Amarenima Redwood chapter 12 . 10/28/2018
Brilliant chapter! I don't feel sorry for Fudge at all.
ThatGreenDooredBookshop chapter 12 . 10/27/2018
Glorious.
StrongGuy159 chapter 12 . 10/27/2018
Cool chapter continue please.
DareusX chapter 12 . 10/27/2018
Nice chapter, almost thought the fic was dead
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