ch2 little bit cringy

the original hiraishin was made by second hokage and Minato made it better

and naruto calling Kurama big brother just feels wrong

would have been better start if it was mutual destruction

first chapter was meh.

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I seriously DONT want them to become a pair
if Naruto says she’s his twin doppleganger best friend and sister then he shouldn’t think of her that way and she shouldn’t think of him that way either

your damn right never piss him off especially things evolve his sister a angry Naruto it’s like having the doom slayer and we all know you do not mess with a pissed off doom slayer well he’s always pissed off and absolutely livid pissed off doomsayer that’s worse

I Thanos will bestow upon you the infinite power if the infinity gauntlet to boost your infinitesimally small power if you update this story.

I know that you are still alive on ff and this story is great.
Yes, the romance is a little forced, but the interactions between all of the characters are new and interesting. The romance itself though as I mentioned is a little forced, is completely adorable. I could just pinch their little cheeks right off!

Update please and thank you.

More chapters please

Please update i kno youre still alive because u still update your other stories so please continue this fanfic

Hope everything is going well again love the story and the pairing can’t wait to see the continued realtionship between Naruto and Naruko. Glad you made this a romance strictly between Naruto and Naruko your writing shows the deep bond they Have for each other. Glad you included that the CRA won’t come into play I have always personally disliked it when writers include into their stories as in excuse for naruto to have a meaningless harem. Not to mention it is downgrading for women in general. Can’t wait to see how naruto and naruko realtionship continues to develop and the next chapter that includes the chunin exam finals and invasion. Hope your doing well and staying safe out their in the world and hope to see you come back to this story soon. Keep up the great work!

Really wish you'd tone down this weird and awkward romance, feels really forced and is definitely taking away from the overal story. Im not completely against the pairing but it feels really forced and like you are changing things in an unbelievable way to accommodate this romance, if the relationship developed overtime more naturally it would be waaaay better.

Finally a time travel fic where Naruto keeps his six paths sage mode! its the first one ive found and ive been looking forever. Unfortunately, something just seems alittle off with the writing or the character interactions or something I just cant put my finger on what it is. I will continue reading as alot of the things in this story I like, and it has pretty good spelling and grammar too.

God I love this fic