Wow
word can't describe
The things i'm feeling right now
This was BEYOND good
please do more stuff like this

Big fan of NCIS, not a fan of FNaF.

That said, this was very well done. The story is just like NCIS: grounded and plausible yet with hints of something more than that going on behind the scene. 8/10 I dock two points only because I'm not a fan of FNaF nor of Bishop.

Read this years ago and it's still good. Great job and great work.

Wow...

Gibbs wins again

Loved it! the only thing i think could have been better is also the one thing that nobody (except MAYBE Scott) is how the phone messages were done.

This was fantastic although when you made the note saying why you changed it from 'The Bite of '87' to 'The Bite of '97' it should've been at the beginning so that people wouldn't automatically rage and comment that you got it wrong without reading the note. Either way, loved the story and keep up the good work.

I'm not a big fan of horror, so when FNaF came out I immediately ignored it, but lately (due partly to a Youtube video on the cultural origins of the idea behind FNaF I started becoming interested in the lore. Long story short, I saw that someone had written a crossover between it and one of my favorite TV shows, and I'm glad to see that you seemed to get everything down pat.

One thing I do want to mention is the issue of Jeremy. I don't know if you're familiar with "Game Theory" and the video done on FNaF 4, but apparently someone who is missing his frontal lobe is unable to have nightmares (or be afraid of anything, period), so the only way to have the story still make sense is that Phone Guy was blowing the injury out of proportion, or that the injury was in a different part of his head. Mind you, I don't expect anyone to know that without looking it up, so it doesn't really detract from the story for the average reader.

That said, I really enjoyed this crossover. Thank you for putting the time and effort in to write it, and I hope that your future projects are met with the same success.

Wonderful. Perfect.

i would love to see a criminal minds version of this

Can you do a remake of NCIS help wanted? Because I think I know how it really works.

It was the bite of 87

What's with the title?

I was just looking for a bit of entertainment and found your story. I must say, I'm thoroughly impressed. This story has been very satisfying and so much fun! :D I hope you have a lovely day!
~Neeky-chan

OMG THIS WAS AMAZING! The way you wrote this... I could see the episode if it were real playing in my head!