AWW! I loved this!

Will you continue this story?

Sick so in the end Astrid gets her own connection with stormfly and magic, which is cool. I can appreciate that you kept hiccup as a dragon as most of these kinds of stories don’t. And I like how you kept hiccup and Astrid as just friends, instead of forcing them together. And I love stormflys intelligence and personality and her story. It’s really immersive and brings you into the story. Overall just a really good story.

Great work!

Seems kind of silly that Astrid isn't tied up or in chains or anything, she did commit treason. Guarding the dragons to keep Astrid away is much stupider than guarding Astrid to keep her away from the dragons.

So caught it.

I see this is the same chapter both here and in the second book, so I'll not review it here. Good to see this story is continuing.

And freaky, because I just finished rereading the first book less than two hours ago, signed into my email, and saw this notification. Talk about convenient!

Well, just going to make a suggestion, as someone that just graduated from college, have you thought about adventure fantasy as a good starting point in your writing career?

More!

Great story. Cant wait for the sequel. Reminded me a bit of Brothers Of Night, but I can say that this is stand alone in its writing and storyline. I hope you find the time and passion to right the sequil because I will be waiting.

I can't wait to see the next part of the series! It took a long time but it was amazing!

That was just amazing I've been glued to it since starting barley able to blink I wanted to continue that much. Thank you for writing this.

Please return want that much sequel. You are amazing.

Wow really good story! Try and do a sequel!

I love this.