But... reading the thesaurus is fun even when you're not bored. (The dictionary, too. So many funs!) I would expect Hermione to be more entertained by it.

The game of trying to cram as many synonyms into one sentence as possible would be more interesting if they attempted to do more than just list all the words in a row, which is what they did most of the time.

You have some run-on sentences and capitalized a pronoun in the middle of a sentnece at one point, but other than that your grammar is mostly fine.

good story.

Great start
I love it, so please continue
Until next time
Gloria

Oh that was a good start, Now where will you go with it. Its to good to be a one shot!

Great- amazing, wonderful, perfect, awesome

This story is adorable!

A well done oneshot. This was just lovely to read. Liked how it transitioned from being mean to each other to something more about their feeling for each other. The thesaurus game was quite something and when it started going to the more positive words did it get endearing g and adorable to read especially the end with the word love for Harry. Nicely done and a good quick read to raise spirits. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

that was very romantic story.. write some more...

Loved this, both funny and romantic, well written and great game!

Aaaaaaaaawww! Adorable Fluffy Harmony Goodness! Yay! :D