I enjoy a lot about this story and I believe in consent and autonomy but I think that the way Stiles overemphasizes everyone's ability to chose for themselves is actually becoming somewhat extreme.
He seems constantly anxious about what to say and how to feel about everything everyone else does while simultaneously overestimating his own influence on how things could have played out. The idea makes sense for time travel, but the lack of a personal development is a bit disconcerting.
It's like he's creating the room for everyone else to grow while he steps back from everything that he could have wanted and done for himself.
I don't believe a story needs a romantic interest to be great, but I think the total lack of selfish love for himself and the denial of his own sexuality (platonic co sleeping most nights) is very out of character. He'd still be a great character if he was allowed to want things for himself.
I love the way you portrayed Derek, Erica, Scott (!) and Isaac. But this reads a bit like it's the saga of Stiles self imposed punishment on himself.

I love this book, it's so good I have re-read it so many times. I can't wait to see Isaac and Scott become werewolves possibly, I can't wait for Cora, Danny, Lydia and Jackson to be incorporated more into the story and we can see the pack bonds and friendships build between stiles and every single person. Love the book and can't wait for it to be updated love your writing.

xx a fan

Great chapter

Been following this forever can't wait for summer break

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Just the best

Great chapter love the relationship change. Good writing. Strong plot points. Keep up the good work.

Another well written chapter. You do character development very well and leave your readers, or at least me, invested into the fates of the characters you're writing. I look forward to seeing what happens next. Take all the time you need

This is awesome.

i love this story. can't stop reading!

Yay for Stiles rescuing Isaac. :) And I'm glad Isaac is staying with them.

Nice chapter, wish it was a bit longer. Looking forward to more.

Awesome new chapter

Even though you don't k now about the Justice system, its fine. Great job!

such a missed opportunity
It would have been amazing if instead of saying he came bearing gifts that he had gotten her a puppy instead