| Reviews for Of Visions and Victory |
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Patricia Adams chapter 2 . 5/16 Love this chapter probably my favourite! |
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MarbleWolf chapter 14 . 7/14/2019 I hope that you'll post more of this. it's very Good! |
MadalynTheHufflepuff chapter 14 . 7/17/2018 Do they (Harry, Ron, and Hermione) ever see each other again |
darkpheonix31 chapter 5 . 1/6/2018 Interesting take on events. I like Harry's anger at Dumbledore and how you write Harry and Sirius, both seem very much in character. I also like that you mention that Lupin is never around unless absolutely necessary. I never liked Remus and always felt that he treated Harry pretty terribly. When he wasn't utterly abandoning him (along with his wife and unborn child during a dangerous war) he was using the fact that he knew Harry's worst memory was witnessing his mother's murder to guilt him into following school rules. Personally i could do without him tagging along with Harry and Sirius but i do like your writing and am interested to see if Dumbledore's latest schemes backfires. How does he expect Harry to train to fight without telling him the prophesy. Now that Voldemort hasn't revealed himself like in canon i wonder how much worse the war will be with Voldemort still operating in secrecy. |
LonePatr0nus chapter 2 . 8/1/2017 Awesome story! |
Phoenixx Rising chapter 14 . 12/29/2016 Hah! I like that Harry and Draco have a growing relationship. However, strained, it's pretty cool. I like that Draco called him "Harry". I like that they are working together and planning. This is gonna get exciting! |
Riniko22 chapter 14 . 12/24/2016 Thank you and Happy Holidays! |
Man of Constant Sorrow chapter 13 . 11/24/2016 Any chance of Harry/Hermione, because the Ron/Hermione relationship your showing is shallow and more platonic than anything else. |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/4/2016 Well, I'm actually in love with your fic! I am a brazilian girl, and thats why i'll not write more text. (Afraid of wrong the words, you know). |
Phoenixx Rising chapter 13 . 10/13/2016 Emotional chapter! |
Lollypops101 chapter 13 . 10/6/2016 great story! |
HalfBloodPrincess110 chapter 12 . 7/19/2016 WOW. THIS IS IMAGINATION GUYS. I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! This story is actually fabulous. I love how you've made sure every detail is accounted for, leaving no weird holes or confusion. Meeting Muriel sounds like a good idea. I feel you could generate a lot of angst from everyone after being with that awful woman. Grammar:Excellent, Spelling:Good, I...HOW ARE YOU GREAT AT EVERYTHING?! I was wondering, when Hermione, Ron, Ginny etc meet Harry, can they curse him, thinking he's a death eater in disguise? Not like bat bogey hex, something nasty from Hermione maybe. Like she hits him with a cutting curse or something and then screams at him, then Harry can have a nice lengthy recovery leaving plenty of room for fluffy confessions and loads of crying. OH AND PLEASE CAN HARRY GET KIDNAPPED AND TORTURED BY DEATH EATERS/VOLDEMORT?! Do you know if there's going to be any romance or new friendships? What do you ship? I SHALL GO DOWN WITH MY GOOD SHIP DRAPPLE. Draco...and his apple. Just an ordinary apple. Not some creepy slang for something, actually just an apple. Anyway, keep writing, and you're gonna probably get a load of PMs from me asking about weird and random and awful ideas, make sure you tell me they're bad, because other wise they'll get worse. Thanks for another awesome chapter! |
HalfBloodPrincess110 chapter 8 . 7/19/2016 I'm crying...brilliant chapter. My only problem was that there were a few spelling mistakes, but honestly it's not like you're spelling 'you' as 'u' so don't stress it. Do you have a beta (out of curiosity)? I'm loving where the plot is going. I'm hoping Hermione and Ron might attack Harry when they find out he's not dead, maybe thinking he's an imposter. You've probably already written that, I only started this story yesterday. The characters are very realistic, keeping to their personalities described in the books. I swear, Ron at the end was just heartbreaking... It's incredible how you can make the reader feel so much! And the feeling for Umbridge...UGH! That Daily Prophet article... Thanks for another great chapter! |
HalfBloodPrincess110 chapter 5 . 7/19/2016 NOOOOOOOOO DUMBLEDORE WHY UMBRIDGE WHY THE STUPID MINISTRY WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?! THIS S EVIL SO UNJUST and a fabulous story by the way. Seriously, it's absolutely brilliant I'm loving it. |