Reviews for Miasma City
Wolf'sVine chapter 6 . 8/9/2017
This is a really strange, otherworldly and oddly fantastic fic! I'm so hooked that I'm already craving to read more! I love Tsuna's endlessly innate kindness and open-mindedness and his accepting nature! I love how he's drawing everyone into his warm sphere of softness and I love how I've never read a fic like this before! Reborn is strict and scary and wonderful! Yamamoto is more burdened than normal, but I guess that makes sense considering, but he's also gentle and friendly and very likable. So's Ryohei, though he's always so passionate! Gokudera is a cat, while still managing to be his normal hot-headed, prickly self and Mukuro is menacing and oddly cordial and I just... please, please write more! I could literally write what my interpretation is of all the characters but that'd be a really long review and I'm mostly just desperate to read more. So, please? Not that I mean to pressure you... and sorry if I am.
Torashii chapter 6 . 6/28/2017
This is a great story! I read the first chapter ages ago and found it again now and I'm really glad that I did bc my initial impression didn't do justice to the wealth of mystery and complexity going on here. This has the feel of a lot of manga (such as Pandora Hearts) where the picture gets bigger and bigger and everyone around the character seems to know more than they're letting on. It's great, and as a reader you can really feel this come through and that pushes you want to read more and more until the whole ugly truth comes out. I really love it, so thank you for writing it!
SequenceRandom chapter 1 . 1/17/2017
This is a very interesting story, I look forward to seeing where it goes :)
Amiacifi chapter 6 . 7/19/2016
Another amazing update! Sad to see Emma go so soon but excited to see Chrome. I'm loving whats going on with Mukuro makes me wonder if Chrome is going to be a new roommate.
The repercussions from chapter is going to be interesting to see, can't wait for the next update!
KellyKatt19 chapter 6 . 7/9/2016
SO. COOL! I really enjoy this writing style, and even though there are a few spelling and tensing mistakes, they're small things and don't detract from the reading at all. This is a really original story, and it must take a fair bit of thought and effort to plan out something like this, which is getting more and more intricate and annoyingly unexplained by the minute. I'm really invested in where this is going and how Tsuna's going to change things (especially how he's gonna change his friends' minds about grudge monsters. And their double standards too, I really wanna know why they're so anti). You only just updated yesterday, but I'm waiting anxiously anyway, because this is so amazing! Luck with writing the next chapter~!

- Kelly
Anon123 chapter 6 . 7/8/2016
Yes! I've been needing this update for so long ! Thank you !
ezcap1st chapter 5 . 5/22/2016
WOAH, BIG, MAJOR REVELATION. totally did not see that coming, although i should have, with all the hints...
Cyndawill chapter 5 . 2/18/2016
This story is Hella lit, with all these different ways of introducing the characters! Please do continue it!
Kiwi chapter 5 . 2/14/2016
Honestly, nothing gives me more life than seeing this story update because it's just a wonderfully fascinating story to follow. I love it!

I'm curious about how Tsuna will get his hands on a storm ring and what the hell did Iemitsu do to make so many people angry at him? A challnge against the Iron Hat that went horribly horribly wrong?

(also much love for the 8027 hints; friendship or romance, people don't appreciate them enough)
k123 chapter 5 . 2/4/2016
Ohhh I really like the world building in this fic! And baby Tsuna, who doesn't realize that everyone is orbiting around him. I really hope he gets a stabilizing ring for Gokudera soon.

And setting up Basil and Yamamoto to be friends was so sweet! He just wants everyone to be happy. Even strangers that attack him.

I'm excited to have Enma join the cast! I can't wait to see where this goes :)
Guest chapter 5 . 2/2/2016
Yaaaaaaaaaaaas I loved this chapter with Yamamoto!
SincerelyDandy chapter 5 . 1/28/2016
This is one of the best fanfics I've read in a while and I'm so happy you updated. Please update with another great chapter!
Glaive chapter 5 . 1/28/2016
Emperor!? Iemitsu, what have you been doing in Italy?! Poor Tsuna, more ghosts to follow him. At least he met Enma 3!

I loved so many things in this chapter! Some of Yamamoto's backstory! (Also, the discussion on his taste in men is hilarious! Ryohei, what magazines did you see, lol I need to know.) And Mukuro... that's so sad, how he keeps his friends' bodies with him... I'm glad though that he visits Tsuna so often! (Even though it kinda freaks Tsuna out hehe.)

Ahh what is the Court and what is the role of the Man in the Iron Hat?! No one wants to tell Tsuna hehe. I'm pretty terrible at speculation. I'll try though. Maybe Iemitsu's overstep has something to do with the stabilization rings' mysterious ores, and perhaps the Man in the Iron Hat tempted Iemitsu to do something stupid about it because he promised an idealized result? There must be like a limited supply of these stabilizing rings and not every Grudge Monster can get one and then they would lose their humanity and that is sad. Yeah. About the stabilizing rings, is it crippling because there's a trade off between stability and power? Since fast deterioration means Tsuna would have been a very powerful Grudge Monster? It also makes me wonder if Reborn and the Vendice were powerful enough to have deteriorated as quickly as Iemitsu did, and if they were that powerful, how did they get stabilizing rings fast enough... unless... it had something to do with the Man in the Iron Hat! Because Arcobaleno. Okay, I'm done. Sorry for rambling so much.

Thanks for updating!
Frwt chapter 5 . 1/28/2016
what happen next?
why so many mysteries that emerges?
and i'm really don't get it about paragon. sorry
Amiacifi chapter 5 . 1/28/2016
Omg you updated! I was about to lose hope, that this story wasn't going to be updated anymore.
I'm loving where the story is going so far, I didn't think Enma was going to be introduced so soon. And now the concept of The Court and Royals coming into play, man this story has great world building.
Hope you update soooooon!
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