Reviews for Undefeated
PheonixQueen15 chapter 2 . 5/27/2019
This is so awesome!
Terra.L chapter 2 . 2/18/2019
Nah I can totally picture Kaito sliding into depression once he has to hang up KID's cape. And npw that i thunk about it, the tribute and memory of his father in KID's lair would bring tears to my eyes when Kiato listens to the recordings It's be nice if this really happens, fits into canon well.
RoonRune chapter 2 . 7/1/2016
You really created the best ending to Kaitou KID's legacy, gave the best personality flares, and brought the Detective of The East in with the right amount of heart. You are SUCH a GREAT writer! Thank you so much for your stories!
Jennosaur chapter 2 . 9/9/2015
Freaking. Amazing. In love with this, and with you.
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 2 . 8/27/2015
Kaito needed that. He was going off the edge to the deep end. Shinichi is a good friend to
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 1 . 8/27/2015
Oh Kaito! Being KID so long must have left it's scars. And Shinichi is always good at knowing who he
Wren Truesong chapter 2 . 7/13/2015
Daaaaang. This was beautiful.
MinamiJSakuya chapter 2 . 4/19/2015
The end? What, why no! On the other hand, I loved it! Thanks for the great fic!
Kensy Echo chapter 2 . 4/12/2015
You can't believe how many times I cried while reading this! Especially the last part of the second chapter. You are really great for able to show the conflict of Kaito's feeling which leads to his depression. I can really feel his stress. When he wanted to share but he used to be so independent. How much he wanted to let his emotion to just flow free but he didn't want anyone to notice the weak part of him, especially his once rival. This FFn is really beautiful! The description for the heist is really amazing, too. I like the "Seeing you work your magic and
impersonating different people really helped
me because I figured if Kaitou KID somehow
managed to work around having a civilian
persona and a "working" persona, as well as
pretending to be practically everyone else and
their mother, then who was I to complain
about having a single alter ego?" part. It really warms my heart to hear that Kid has even helped Shinichi too with his heist. I really really love the idea of this FFn, so you should write more aboit them, okay? Keep writing!
Tohda chapter 2 . 4/11/2015
awwww... so nice.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/11/2015
Amazing! Awesome! Fantastic! Fabulous!
Kameo1 chapter 2 . 4/11/2015
YES! The second part and it was beautiful:) loved every second of it and Shinichi is do awesome! Showing up and MAKING him rest regardless of Kaito's resistance. Knocking him out with the watch was a genius move. Thank you for this story, it really made my day :)
chibi raven-san chapter 1 . 4/6/2015
Impressive how much research you put into the story, I won't even ask how you were able to type the yen symbol Japanese use locally. A serious chapter but interesting either way. I look forward to the second part.
Kameo1 chapter 1 . 4/6/2015
This was really great! I felt so much emotion for Kaito while reading this, the ups and downs and the pain of losing purpose and those close to him. Hopefully he can get a friendship with Shinichi because without Aoko I think he's really emotionally starved and needs someone to support him. Really, really loved this story and I'm excited for the next part!