espero que algún día continúes este fanfic porque la verdad esta muy entretenido pero la verdad dudo que vuelvas a actualizar una verdadera pena suerte en lo que quieras que estés haciendo

Really wish there was an omake where Finn got All the girls... Like you know, a real man.
He would have his own kingdom, where different species would love in harmony, Finn is the King and Spadina has his own harem, yadda yadda yadda... *Sigh* I wish...

This had been one heck of a ride, there has been lots of ups and downs, moments of tears and moments of happiness. And even in another reality Finn still doesn't get to have parents... Well I say screw that, I'll have my Badass!FinnyBoi, with his own kingdom, and his harem of girls, and he will be awesome and they will live happily- oh wait, there's no such thing as"Happily Ever After" is there?! You just have to torment Finn, don't you!? And you just had to have the baby as a Marshall-horcux DIDN'T YOU!?

I DON'T LIKE THIS

Meep

Welp, that's one way to end a story, I guess.

I'm going to be honest hear, I don't think this was a good ending. You built up a dynamic, interesting relationship between Finn and his companions, only to kill off nearly half of those companions, and ostracize the remainder companions except for one.

I feel, that with what was being led up too, you could have easily gotten 2 to 4 more chapters before you start killing off characters. That, and perhaps seen some character progression in Marceline, perhaps even leading to a tentative peace.

Ah well, what's done is done, and I understand that this was basically a last minute rush job of an ending(at least, that's what I got from the author's notes), and I hope the epilogue can fill in some of the cracks.

In any case, I enjoyed most of what I read, and wish you the best of luck in future fics.

kinda broke me abit on the ending, but ive had enough grief time and im waiting for the next chapter if youre still working on it.

Enjoyed the story a lot but did you have to break my heart at the end :(

Honestly, this story was stupid and didn’t have a point at all. It was literally written to just be porn with a bad ending. It’s only saving grace is that it’s well written. Had this been written with the story longer and more fleshed out the ending might have been satisfying though, but since the story was an afterthought it’s just silly and needless. Kinda outta character for some of them too. Good job, dude. Get better at story building. Or just stick to writing smut. Either/or, take your pick.

Not particularly satisfying. So,e of the sex scenes were alright though I wish they carried more emotional weight. Also why is this considered done if it's stated to be "on hold" on your account?

Seems really forced to be honest. It's fine if you don't want it to have a happy ending but alot of it just seems like a sudden and unnecessary break in the stories flow.

How fast did they go back to killing eachother?
Good job though the end is kind of suspect. It seems kind of strange that finn would just get over seeing someone who is not supposed to be there. Especially if they were a vampire.

It was all ready a fairly crappy ending before you killed the Nymph (we’ll writen though) I mean you hate the human kingdoms at war and the vampires still at large it was all ready bleak before you killed her. Wish it had more Flame Princess x Finn though. But it was enjoyable

this is a really good story, regardless of what happened to Huntress, and the plot twists are really appreciated. Keep it up mate.

Enjoyed it, great story.

That epilogue though...

The ending was beautiful and just fine. Sorta wished that Finn ended up with more of happy ending but this will do. Keep up the amazing work!