This story was really good, I sorta skimmed it but. I still liked it.

Are you going to continue up to the point where the movie starts? I'd be really interested to see what happens when Tadashi dies (maybe) does the string fade? Does it stay there but just never respond to the tugging? If Tadashi dies but sticks around as a ghost will the string still be there? That might be fun to write about how the two of them communicate through the string language. If Tadashi survives but is in a coma how would the string respond? If Tadashi becomes Sunfire wil Hiro realize who he is because of the string? There are so many cool ways you could go with this, J can't wait to see what you end up doing (if you continue at all, which you totally should)

I hope you will cognitive this

My god I'm crying. I think my heart just crawled in a small dark corner and died. This is so sad. My precious Hamadas. You are an amazing author, really good. ️️️️️

Continue plsss!

Ha, I love how you described the 'starfish hands'. And such a wonderfully written ficlet.

I really love this. I hoe you write more.

The BEST story I've ever read in my life - I'm not one for reading, either!

I can't believe how well you write, you just draw the reader in further and further until they just can't stop reading. The whole entire story was amazing and for once, it's not sexual either (based on many stories I've read on here).

It's a very cute story about how that Hamada's grew up together, was up until 2am reading this!

As I'm a new account I can publish my own story and to be honest, I'm not even sure if it's any good - but I got my first chapter ready to go already lol. I look forward to your future stories and shall be reading them! Thanks for an amazingly cute story! :D

I love it! More please!

oh my god this hit me in the feels so
fucking
_hard_

My god thank ya, thank ya so much for updating this, I just realized ya updated this story two days ago. When I saw that you updated this story, it made my day, now I can die in peace. No actually I can't die in peace just quite yet, not intell ya finish this story, then I can die in peace. Any got to go now, but I'll be back for the next time ya update M.A333 out. Bloop, Boop, Doop.

This is that legend, "red string of fate", right? Where the thread leads to the person you're meant to be with?
I'm surprised they haven't found that legend yet when searching the web. Plot interference, I guess.
Update soon please.

In reply to Author's Note: Of course! (not really, but its so cu~te).

Awwww I really am enjoying this story. It seems to capture the very essence of the brothers' relationship from what I interpreted in the movie. This is quickly becoming one of my favorite things, And its all tied up with string (hehehehe...references? music? I didn't make any...*shifty eyes with sly smile* Xp ). Silly-ness aside, on to this chapter review.

I really like Hiro's teasing of ' 'Dashi,' when he notices that Tadashi actually does not have a clue as to what the Red String is...and in a way, the use you are using it not only makes sense, but it explains so well how Tadashi is able to have "Hiro senses."
I am also glad that Tadashi was able to get to the middle-schooler's before they were able to hurt Hiro again...although I would really wish that Hiro and any other child didn't have to go through that in the first place-both emotionally and/or physically, but at least in a story there can be a moral and lesson to take without having to actually experience or witness a situation of the like...maybe one day...(as I get off topic again, and put my opinions for every 'lurking shadow' to read if they wish...myself included...)

Also, Tadashi and Hiro sneaking into SFIT in order to see the opening presentations of the scholarship awards was heart-warming...especially with Hiro's input on the string. I am really hoping this turns into a AU so that we won't ever have to know the answer to that question (although I feel as if you might be setting up for it...and am also curious as to the answer to the question...why oh why do good stories have to have some form of conflict!? *rhetorical question, but feel free to give your input...*)
Also, I really appreciate that you have gone ahead and shown a little part of what has happened with Hiro's education and how he and those around him are affected by the decisions of the school board, and the students and peers that surround him.

Please continue when you are able. I really am enjoying this story and will try my best to check regularly so that I will be able to review each of your chapters.

Ah fudge. This is just so sweet.

I have two questions Author-san. Depends on you Author-san if you will answer it or not.

Will you let Tadashi die?

And

Is the invisible string a 'Red String of Fate'?

I think that was an awesome and creative way of isong the string. And I'm actually a little suprised Tadashi doesnt have much of a clue what the string is. But, by the way he's avoiding the subject, he probably does. I cant eait to see what happens. I was SUUUUUUPER suprised to see this chapter, but I am ecstatic to see it! THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER!