I usually go crazy when I read a Shizaya fic but didn't get to read any Shizaya action,but...I think this is a beautiful masterpiece. I even had my ups and downs too! Thank you so much for sharing. I must check to see if any of my favorite picks from your list are finished. I'm so happy you finished this. Thanks again.

Well I'm sad I can't follow them around for longer. This story is amazing and it makes me truly happy. If I had to change one thing, I just would want a sex scene, but I'm a dirty ass whore

But anywho~ in response to your response... MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAA I SKIPPED ALL THE CLIFFIES (cliff hangers) - I'm sooo happy I decided to read this~

I'm super glad that you're doing well; your book will be wonderful (pure fact), and I cant wait to read what you write next.~ I'm incredibly happy to be one of your readers :3

Beautiful purely beautiful! I was so moved that i skipped reading your response to me, and came straight to the review section! This made me so happy and sad and happy! I loved EVERY minute of this fic, and your emotional writing is spot on, as always.~
While I did tear up during this fic, I didnt cry; but that doesnt mean in any way, shape, or form that TWtD wasn't worth the tears!~ Its worth ALL the tears and more! I hope you continue writing beautiful things until you die -; ... but please never die... in fact... discover immortality...

Don't you think it's stupid to send your story away like this? It being stolen is the least of your problems, more like that publishers will refuse to even print that book of yours once they've seen that you have provided it to an audience like this. They just have to google the title and they'll know. Publishers have to research a title before printing to make sure it's not a stolen one. You won't sell enough in their eyes like this...
Not that it would even matter. If that book is anything like your fanfictions it'll be too boring to read anyway. Don't get me wrong. Your stories have a good start, but tend to tire the reader out after a few chapters. They are too mainstream.

Aw I was so touched by the ending, I almost thought I was going to cry tbh it was so sweet and good. As for turning this into an actual book, I can so see this. It was really good and I think it could be good for a lot of people to representation of depression like this in a story. Let us the development of that and how it goes.

Awwww! Let it all out Cookie, it's okay! Don't worry I loved the ending! Okay first of all, "Izaya always pays his debts"? Whose debts? Shizuo's? He's always paying Shizuo's debts?! My god, that's love, even when he didn't want anyone to notice. And damn Shizuo was so understanding and knowing exactly how he felt about guilt and regret because he had done so many things he regretted in his life and Izaya still fearing that his best friend might not even care about him at all and Shizuo thinking how Izaya had friends, like Simon for example but Shinra of course being devasted because his best friend almost killed himself and he didn't even notice anything amiss and then in the end they are both crying and it was so beautiful? And how Shizuo is proud of all progess he makes and the talks with Shinra and Izaya not being able to do hugh steps and has to phrase things in the negative like "I like that I'm not completely stupid, I guess" and it's so realistic? Love him going to be a lawyer because of his guilt. And I love love love the small bits with Kuro and Shinzuo coming over at 4 am and the cup scene was fucking beautiful?! I loved it. There isn't enough room to get everything I love into this.
THANK YOU FOR THIS AMAZING STORY!

Well no need to feel bad about not getting it out quickly. It was beautiful, but life also got in the way and I finally got to read it. Izaya makes my heart hurt

I've FINALLY read this book! I've been meaning to, because it's your most popular one, right? (I go by the amount of reviews even tho i shouldn't)

I'M SUPER GLAD YOU'RE BACK AND I'M SUPER GLAD THAT YOUR GRANNY IS BETTER! I HOPE EVERYTHING STAYS WONDERFULL FOR YOU!

Oops, lol. **I can’t believe their are only two more to go!

I can’t believe George are only two more to go! :/ I don’t want it to end! But it’s been so good! :)

I feel you, Izaya.

Honestly I can see them being upset, but not angry. For one thing, Shizuo's perspective changed for a good reason-

("All hail Shizaya!" she says while waving a flag)

-and so I figure everyone would be relieved. I imagine some nimrod would state they hate him for not doing it... only to get a trashcan to the face xD

All in all, this was a good chapter. Once again, I relate to Izaya- feeling the need to change, yet also go back to who I used to be... its a conflicting battle, but no one has to do it alone. Help is there- its accepting it that feels like a trial.

BUT THIS ISN'T ABOUT ME, IT'S ABOUT YOUR BEAUTIFUL STORY! THE WAIT. WAS. WORTH IT. *throws a cake to you*

Also I'm glad your granny is doing better. She must be a strong woman! (Waves flag again) Hooray for grannies!

...

Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go find our guys and find out why they haven't shown up in this review!

Erika: ...I FOUND THEM! THEY WENT TO SHIBUYA!

Me: I KNOW THE PHANTOM THIEVES THERE! LETS HUNT 'EM DOWN!

*both of us jump in a car and shoot off*

Great chapter again! I like how Izaya tries to sort his thoughts out and to explain them for Shizuo and Shizuo is just glad that Izaya is alright. But damn Izaya feeling still guilty and scared and still worthless about himself and about so many things that he did that I don't even know what he's exactly referring to when he says: "You should hate me for this" For running? For making them worry? For the criminal/bad stuff he did? Damn, Shizuo probably wouldn't blame him for running off because by now he knows how anxious and instable Izaya's emotions are and how easily he can be overwealmed. Aww, yeah it's been a long time, right? But really? three years? It seemed way longer to me O_O damn! XD
Thank you for updating!

YOU'RE OKAY OMG
HI.
I'm glad you're grandma's okay, it must be so scary...
On another note, I do feel as though I should probably read all of it again :D But that's okay because I love this fic!