Reviews for Little Adult
fluffykitty12 chapter 1 . 3/30
Beautiful
Blue Teller chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
That... was... EPIC! :D
The description of the fight was awesome! I loved how visual and realistic you made it! And Mustang's musings were great too. I can totally see something like that happen in the real thing.
Epic, epic I tell you!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/7/2015
Luved this hope to see another story soon!
Kas3y chapter 1 . 4/15/2015
Awwww, I loved this. If u ever wanted to do a sequel u could so have the bad guy escape somehow and come after Ed. But either way. I greatly enjoyed this read :D
dpfrontera chapter 1 . 4/7/2015
Another great piece from you developing an interesting theme ( psychology of killing) and a bit of delightening humor in it :)) and don't we forget the warming Roy's parental care as usual... I enjoyed it, keep the good work
Fire From Above chapter 1 . 4/4/2015
Nice seeing Mustang marvel at how much Ed can go from kid to adult like that.