Reviews for Never Take a Baby to the Beach |
---|
The Bohemian Rhapsody chapter 1 . 1/11 Plot twist! THEY WERE AN INCESTUOUS ORGY GROUP |
Bad chapter 1 . 5/22/2018 Dude... I can't read this. |
TheFire54 chapter 1 . 8/5/2016 EDIT: Oops, 4got that the father ran away. :p |
TheFire54 chapter 1 . 8/4/2016 Um, not to be mean, but there are a few problems with this story. 1. The weird text that shows before each part of the story. Might wanna fix that. 2. Patrick was there, right? So he should've just save his daughter before the shark came. But meh, nice on the whole JAWS music and sharks. |
FanficLovingPerson chapter 1 . 10/18/2015 Bro you need to fix this |