Needs a few more chapters.

Kinda meh. it lacks punchline

This was fun.

Interesting

Please expand. On this awesome, amazing idea

Not bad, I suppose. I'll never understand this fascination with Dumbledore and the greater good that Fanfiction seems to have, but your short parody works for its purpose. I look forward to more.

This story seems quite good ! Don't get why you abandon it!

Pure awesomeness! :D

Adore this

This is an interesting idea. I'm pretty sure that I have never read of a puppeted Voldemort before.

I see a lot of possibilities- including a darker Hermoine (perhaps bullying gone too far, or her family killed by overeager minions) and an equally dark Seer!Luna guiding both of them to fulfill Harry's goals.

Maybe using Riddle's knowledge to dominate the Black family magic through Sirius. Sirius is still very weak in many ways, after all. It wouldn't take much manipulation to convince him that AD has never had Sirius's best interests at heart and that Harry and Remus are the only ones whom he can trust.

Perhaps with all that power and access to the Black they could puppet Dumbledore, as well. So many ways to go. We could see Harry simply leaving, starting down a slippery slope, or maybe leveraging himself as Headmaster.

Obviously, I love this premise ...

I'm interested in how this turns out!

I love it! You should really continue writing it... and your idea of messing up with the ritual is the best one I found yet. Thanks for the story :D

This is the first plot idea I've read of this kind, very intriguing. Count me as one that would like read more of this. An original idea of a beginning dark Harry

This needs continuance! "Light-eaters" - excellent metaphor for this fic universe!

Reminds me of the ending of Black Vengeance, when Sirius uses the Horcrux to turn Voldemort into his enforcer.