Reviews for Mess Me Up
Ildaa chapter 2 . 12/29/2017
aw I hope you would continue this story.
monomatryoshka chapter 2 . 6/18/2016
I love this! Stressed student Ivan is so relatable, omg. Can't wait to read more!
Chocolate chapter 2 . 2/10/2016
Oh. My. Glob. This is amazing plz continue, I don't know if I can go on anymore. Plz update *:.。. o()o .。.:*
guardianofdragonlore chapter 1 . 7/24/2015
This is very good! I can't wait for more.
guardianofdragonlore chapter 2 . 7/24/2015
Ah man Alfie. Just find a hint of peace before Ivan ends up insane...
SailorCheesy chapter 2 . 7/22/2015
This is so cool! Can't wait for more!
Wowowow chapter 2 . 7/6/2015
PLEASE CONTINUE :0 I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR ESPECIALLY THE INTERACTION BETWEEN ALFRED AND IVAN AH I LOVE IIIT~ ALSO WHEN ALFRED WOULD MESS AROUND WITH IVAN AND THE COFFEE THING MADE ME LAUGH XD XD LOVE IT
Guineapiglily chapter 2 . 6/1/2015
really good, plz write more
lostbluefox chapter 2 . 4/19/2015
poor Ivan. way to be a dick Al! Wtf
I'd flip if all my coffee was wasted like that Jesus

BTW it's"he was becoming paranoid"
your English is very good though
thanks for the update!
Hello chapter 2 . 4/19/2015
... what does Matthew know about Ivan's apartment?
December Writing Dragon chapter 2 . 4/19/2015
Oh god D: EASE UP, ALFRED! THIS IS JUST PLAIN RUDE. I absolutely see what you mean about dangers that aren't physical. Yikes- this is really going to take its toll :( That's the saddest imagery, Ivan on the couch crying...and how he "practised happiness" to make it like nothing's wrong- good god, that's so sad D: But this story continues to look great! I love the thoughts throughout it- they're all so gritty, witty, and very real. I agree, Vanya- information should just be absorbed like osmosis. If only...

Hmmm...I'm watching you, Matthew... XP
pastaaddict chapter 2 . 4/19/2015
Perhaps Ivan should talk to Ghost Alfred. Maybe all he wants is attention, he must be lonely! :'(
pastaaddict chapter 1 . 4/19/2015
Can't wait to read more of this! XD
GalacticExplosion chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
Its really good and I hope to see more of it! Also, you really can not tell that English is not your native language. I mean I read your author's note after I read your story and it was surprising to learn that it wasn't your native language, you write it better than quite a few native english speakers actually! XD Anydoodle, hope to see some more of you in the rusame/amerus stories!
au revoir mon lapin .
Party chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
Yoo im excited to see the rest of this! V. good
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