Amazing.

Who knew this four year old fanfic could predict the Steven Universe movie?

Pearl got super excited about teaching Steven how to swordfight, what do you mean he's not allowed to use a knife to cut food?

You know Pearl's expression she makes when she's crying not to cry? That's what my face is doing right now.

Now a part of me wants a remake of this post pink diamond reveal.
That would be something.
Or just the beginning. I really liked the first 2 and a half chapters or so, what I like in this type of story. Something like that, but longer, with all the new stuff, more drama!

What a great story! I'm so happy I stumbled across this! Everything I wanted in a Steven Universe fic! Great job keeping everyone in-character, and I'm very impressed how you manage to tell the story with much of the emotion of an actual SU episode - I was practically crying for poor Steven for a bit there! And the happy ending, because of course we need a happy ending! Thank you for a great fic!

Well written, I have to say. Of course, there are typos. And missing spaces. And some words are missing altogether, but that's besides the point. Satisfying ending, I have to say. I love your writing Elexus, can't wait for the next chapter of Little Rebellions either.

Pearl trying to take out Steven's gem? Did you just partially predict Three Gem's And A Baby?

So good :) I will be rereading it later!

This was pure gold in the form eleven chapters! I love this story and the way you wrote it was amazing! Excellent!

This was an amazing story. It has an original concept and was executed perfectly! There was so much emotion out into this story and you could really feel them throughout. This story has to be one of my favorites. Awesome job!

This made me cry. Tis a good story!

I have no words to express how perfect this is.

Oh my gosh. This story was torture to get through. It hurt me in the feels. A lot. And I couldn't binge read like I wanted to because I have chores. Great story tho.

K I guess