Reviews for Unbelievable and Unexpected
lenokiie chapter 5 . 6/6/2016
I love seeing Muldoon getting a story of his own! Please continue updating this, I love it!
guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2016
You should do a sequel or a one - shot for their date.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/14/2015
Love this story! Has to be one of my favourites
Whovian33 chapter 6 . 6/14/2015
Honestly, I didn't know what to expect when I read the description. Now, I'm really glad I read this story. It's brilliant and you did a really great job!
Musical cake chapter 6 . 4/29/2015
Aww. That was really cute. They got each other's backs
Gage the Hedgehog chapter 6 . 4/23/2015
Nice work on this story. I am glad to read it.
MySoxRockXD chapter 6 . 4/23/2015
A tad rushed but I loved it :) hope you decide yo do the other movies too!
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 6 . 4/23/2015
loved it
Theresa F chapter 6 . 4/23/2015
Other then it seemed you were trying to end this quickly, I do think you could have been a little more detailed in this chapter so it didn't seem so rushed, it was a fabulous re-telling of the movie! I so hated that they killed Muldoon and changed so much in the movie since in the book there was much more that went on along with Mulder being a more of a hero.
Thank you for writing a good story and I hope to read more Jurassic Park stories from you.

Theresa
NicoleR85 chapter 6 . 4/23/2015
A little rushed, but I loved it. I hope you do the other movies.
Musical cake chapter 5 . 4/19/2015
I'm glad, too. Great chapter!
MySoxRockXD chapter 5 . 4/19/2015
Aaaahhh I friggin love this so much already :) literally this story is exactly what I wanted! The only thing I think has been potentially off is, I think its a triceratops (sp?) not a stagasaurus(sp?) that's sick when ellie stays to help, but I could be wrong it's been a while since I've watched the movie. But either way I bloody love this story and cannot wait for more!
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 5 . 4/17/2015
i loved it
NicoleR85 chapter 5 . 4/17/2015
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one. Are you gonna write any sequels after this?
Theresa F chapter 4 . 4/16/2015
I'm enjoying this story, considering what a pivotal role Muldoon had in the book and made him a nicer guy in the movie but should have done si much more with him. I do remember seeing Bob Pecks athletic footballer(soccer) legs again, had scene him many small roles on PBS. Anyone want to see him in some good stuff check out Jim Hendson's The StoryTeller The Soldier and Death or one of his best roles in the Edge of Darkness forcwhich he won BAFTA for Best Actor. Then there is the not sosuccessfull SciFi film called Slipstream, if they had filmed the original script instead of trying to make a kid friendly movie it would have done better and been more coherent.

I do hope to read more of this story and hope you do like in the book and make Muldoon more of a living hero than a dead one!
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