Woah. That was... A journey. I totally binged this while procrastinating. I. Love. It! There are no words for how amazing and beautiful this is, in my opinion. I just got absorbed into it... But seriously, Woah.

Ty for all ur hard work!

God that's such bullsht.

You better not copout. I fully expect some angsty death scene by the end.

Enjoyed reading your story!

It was good

I like stories that include immortality, as in: I'm immortal for a long time...I'm tired of it, I want to die...

and then getting what they waited for, but not before living the life to the fullest again, but this time, die amongst others, the ones they cherish.

very sweet story!

Congrats on finishing this story! *Clapping* :)
Good job on this story and good luck to your future projects :)
-BlueCapricorn

Oh, this is beautiful.

amazing, beautiful.

I feel your pain, computers do that to me too.

very, very good

For all I claim to be a writer myself, words escape me in description of how this story has touched me. There has been laughed and thrown fists to the sky in celebration. There has been tears and sobs choked off in determination to read what comes next, as tear-blurred eyes make for difficult reading. And then there are simply smiles that have come, particularly at this moment of its conclusion. There's a talent to your weaving, ensnaring in your net of building words, and it's so, so painfully obvious... You've done well with this piece, exceptionally so, and I look forward to being enchanted by the others. — Grae

There are feels all over my phone (and down my face), I love this fic...