The clubhouse scene is definitely one of the most powerful in the chapter. The physical testament to Rachels life over the past five years, her mentality, the kind of person she is now. It certainly felt very intimate to sift thru the pieces there. And it has to be excessively weird for Max as the Janney-Come-Lately, sudenly dropped back in, In Media Res, into the Chloe Show.

Good job, really taking those unspoken threads from Chapter 2 and running with it. In the parent narrative, Chloe doesn't seem ready to talk about it yet, but clearly it would have been nice if that actually had happened by this point.

Beautifull
Perfect
Perfecto
Perfeito
J ' adore
XDXDXD please please please please pleaseeeeeee continue it XD

It could be canon, it might as well be! _