Reviews for King's Orders
Aria Reese chapter 1 . 10/22/2018
You wouldn't believe how relieved I was when I realized this was role-playing.
SaberNymph chapter 1 . 10/21/2018
veeerrrryyyy sexy and realistic version of Ban. love it!
Diclonious57 chapter 1 . 2/19/2017
you don't know how relieved I was when I read it was just role play, nice
CatLady101 chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
Good story, I'd love it if you did one on how they met and got together even if it's just a one shot
IShipItInHell chapter 1 . 6/16/2016
liked this a lot!
MidnightArcher147 chapter 1 . 1/22/2016
You really captured Ban's personality in this. I really like how he acted it really did fit him. I don't know if you ship them, but if you do, could you make a Ban and Meliodas pairing? That would be cool. Anyways great story, please keep up the good work.
rinpup14 chapter 1 . 1/6/2016
Awesome story
WolfGirl2468 chapter 1 . 12/17/2015
That was good
Madylyne Hatter chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
I was like "He would never rape a girl. no way no how." SO i was delighted to find she married him! :D makes sense now!
angilo-deabo-chi chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
sweet dame this kinda blow my mind I feel kinda out of it this was very good but wow
XxHeartMenderxX chapter 1 . 6/14/2015
OMG this one shot made me happy! Ban is one of my favorite characters. And despite being an avid BanxElane (probably spelled that wrong. pretty sure there's an i in there...) fan, I'm so glad I decided to read this. I'll probably be looking into more BanxOC stories now (if there are any more... this anime/manga is truly underrated...) All in all great job getting Ban's playful/sadistic/selfish character down. And thanks so much to contributing to the Seven Deadly Sins archive~
Kendran chapter 1 . 4/6/2015
Very very well done descriptive writing. I felt every single thing the characters were going through well done, very well done.
But I have to say that tore out my freaking heart. I mean I know it's supposed to be roll playing at the end, but JESUS! ... Maybe I had such a reaction because this hits so close to home. Ban can very easily turn into the person described here. He is a thief in every sense of the word, he has no compunctions about killing, and he is very predatory in nature (not that I don't absolutely love that, but I only find it hot when its controlled), he will indeed take whatever he wants. It would not be a big leap to stretch that to people as well, whether it was roll-playing or not. But that is the only way I can explain why your OC didn't roast him from the inside out during that torture.
But on the the more important stuff! Your writing was awesome. It made me feel and keep reading right up until the end, which is the greatest thing any writer can do. You should be proud of this. Keep it Up and Be Safe and Well.
Lolyflow chapter 1 . 4/1/2015
It's really good i find that not ban x oc yet then thanks you for you fic and write other ban x oc fic please