i need moreD wjsjwjsieb this is so good

I absolutely love this fic! The characterisation of your OC and Nishinoya are written really well and the background of your OC is really interesting, she makes you want to keep reading to see what she'll do next and how she'll evolve. You must have done a lot of research for your OC or maybe are a former gymnast? Your explanations from her POV of gymnastics are very in depth and sound very realistic, especially her mental health. I hope you continue to update this fic! :)

Oh...my god~! I love how...how...utterly raw and human you've made her out to be! It's such a hidden gem of a story that I honestly will read this again 11/10.

The way you've written their POV'S in a way that their personalities and inner workings show so vividly is such a fantastic addition to the already amazing plot and backstory that has already been shown!

I loved the way this was written! How you separated inbetween, the actually small amount of dialogue, all of it was amazing!

I'm sorry but as a libero myself, I must point that liberos do set sometimes. Same with serving, although the rules ARE different, Liberos do serve once in a while.

I really enjoy your stories, and I look forward to more content in the future! :))

I like how you write the chapters from the different perspectives of Himura and Nishinoya, and I especially like the way their thoughts are woven into the story. Himura feels so real, and the way you describe passion toward sports is so vivid and relatable. I also enjoy the way you've written Nishinoya outside of volleyball. He's very energetic and compassionate, and he'll definitely be an amazig influence on Himura.

I look forward to the next chapter! Thank you for writing this!

I really love this story. You are awesome for making this. I especially love the interaction between Himura and Nishinoya, they are so cute XD i can't wait for them to go out, the cuteness will x2. oh and i can't wait for Himura to start playing volleyball. I just really love your story so i can't wait for the next chapter. please update soon ;)

Ooo... I like this! Let me know if you are still continuing this! :D

My immediate reaction: wow, just wow. I'm in awe how your writing just sucked me in, and I'm glad you're writing shows character depth. I'm really excited to see where this will go!

Honestly I didn't have high expectations for this fic, it was just going to be a bit of fun reading before bed- BUT YOU BLEW ME AWAY- i am actually speechless, you not only created a realistic character with realistic problems and made it original, you connected her seamlessly and kept characterisation on point AND LAYED THE FOUNDATIONS FOR CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT-!
Frankly I am AMAZED!
Keep It up!
I'll be watching out for an update ;)

Xx moonbeam

If this were in based on a different show, I'd probably say this was a little melodramatic, but it absolutely fits with Haikyuu (and I love it so much, so in this case it's a good thing). I LIKE your OC (which I can't say for a lot of "my dreams have been crushed" OCs, so kudos for managing to make her damaged without having her be all "pity me, dammit! I'm the main character!"), and I think she fits very well. Like, I could very easily see her being a canon character who was only mentioned in passing until she became more relevant to the plot (like the captain of the girls' team was). Also, I think you have the canon characters spot-on (because OF COURSE Nishinoya would manage to inadvertently save somebody while he was suspended-between him and Hinata, they're like morale and motivation personified). Sometimes the POV changes are a little jarring because they kind of bounce back and forth through time, but you usually do a very good job of glossing over the parts you've already covered in a different POV while still being clear what scene you're revisiting, and I think the POV changes help to make the canon characters' actions more... understandable? I mean, they're nice guys who are enthusiastic about volleyball, so helping somebody through volleyball is totally in character anyway, but having them tell it from their perspective makes their actions feel even MORE in character-more that they are acting the way they do because of who THEY are, not because the girl is somehow just that special, you know? So, in summary, I am enjoying this story very much and am looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Please update

This is so good!

As a short girl I have to agree short girls are the cutest haha