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janet Garrett chapter 30 . 8/12 I know this story is several years old and iam entering this fantastic story late, but let me just say I have never read anything so touchingly sad and amazing. I started this read on Sunday 08.09.2020 and today is Wednesday which is why I never start stories more than 20 or so chapters, but I'm so glad I broke my rules and will never forget this story and its tragic ending. Ana so betrayed in my heart even though he hurt her so,loves Christian still and Christian Loved Ana until the day he died , it breaks my heart. Thank you for this amazing Journey of Love, Heartbreak, loss and Pain |
oliveoil4u chapter 30 . 7/9 Wow! I pray by now the hardness of your family matters have had positive outcomes. Spoiler alert for those who have not read the story. STOP reading this now! The depth of both AnaChristian is real. These fictional characters became alive. The terrible real life shortfall of cheating in a relationship and the devastating impact it has you fully captured. You fought for both of their beliefs. I appreciated reading this! Thank you |
oliveoil4u chapter 2 . 6/20 Cheers, to lovely beginnings! |
oliveoil4u chapter 1 . 6/15 So much in this one chapter! This has grace and style. So far, Ana backbone has returned and is standing up for herself! |
Lena Whistler chapter 30 . 4/27 I just read this story for the 3-4 time,I Absolutely Love it! I also Absolutely Hate it ! I usually like reading HEAs but this story is well written and so graphic and bare I can’t forget it. I’m sure I will read it again in the future just because it will call for me again. Lol Thank You for sharing it with us. |
drakejronke chapter 30 . 4/8 Holy f, that last chapter was intense. It actually drew tears i had to take a minute to compose myself. I am disappointed she never took his letter, also wish there was a chapter of how ana is goin now from her pov, all in all was a get story one that I didn't think would go in the direction it did but i enjoyed it |
Guest chapter 30 . 3/10 This book is my favorite of all of the Fifty Shades of Grey I have read. I’ve read it so many times and the ending guts me just as much as it did the first time I read it. Thank you for such a beautiful and fascinating story. |
JACKIE chapter 30 . 2/28 i loved [the promise ]chapter i feel my heart bleed for them i know it's fan fiction but so true to life |
nan78rdz chapter 22 . 2/9 I remember reading this story a few years back and I feel like this story was condensed so it would be shorter because I feel like there were chapters taken away they story is great no matter what but if it was shortened then there are some things that were taken place that I have read |
MrsHoityToityLady chapter 30 . 1/12 Hi, read it again. What an incredible story. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
tanyaleigh chapter 30 . 1/2 This was an amazing story! Thanks for sharing it with us. |
Nordfreezeland chapter 30 . 12/27/2019 Dear Anna, what a journey! I could‘t put your story down. A lot was very cruel, cruel actions, raw feelings. Very well put together and you found a good ending. Thank you for sharing! All the best to you from Anke from Germany |
Guest chapter 23 . 12/2/2019 Hi, I'm reading your story. You either had a bad relationship before or you just don't like Christian grey. |
Annette 101660 chapter 29 . 10/29/2019 I reread this story over the past couple days. Well written but tough to get through at times. It tugged at my heartstrings. It would have been nice to have one more chapter of Ana finally receiving Christians letter and her thoughts. Nevertheless thank you for sharing this story with us. |
Lisanomoreaguest chapter 28 . 10/17/2019 I love this story so much but like the original chapter better 3 |