Amazing story! Thx for the read!

I love the imagery you give the conversations. The two halves acting independent despite still being together is mesmerizing, even in writing. Norman’s POV was a good choice.

Dude, this is a good one. Loved the contrast.

Well that was cute as hell

I really, really like this fic's voice. I felt like it really carried a flavor of Paranorman that's fairly special to the movie, one that's a sad, resigned, resilient, altruistic, and hopeful. You were also great with Danny from an outsider's perspective, considering how absurd and volatile his circumstances generally tend to be. I liked the parts where Danny's 'ghost' was doing things out of sync from human!Danny and giving away clues to where Danny's mind really is, and how Norman discreetly just doesn't mention it out loud. Their initial meeting was also great, where Danny just takes the bull by the horns and Norman is left gaping. It was all a really satisfying read!

I am shitting you not- this is my fave DP crossover and like my forth time reading it. I was so glad to discover you where the same autor from other DP fics I enjoyed so much! Thanks!

Second person is often pretty difficult to get right but the way you wrote it seemed to flow so naturally that I almost didn't notice it. You blended the universes together beautifully, and the plot is believable and elegant. This was a wonderful story. Well done!

Wow! I normally hate second person point of view, but you've done it right! Bravo!

This story is so fun to read, and the tense seems so playful. There's a lyrical aspect to your sentence structure, and if there were any mistakes in this, I didn't notice them!

Great job!
~Rosalind

Ahhhhhh... Such a cool story! I absolutely loved it! You did a great job with both of the characters! It was interesting how Danny's ghost and human halves were splitting apart at the beginning of the story. Awesome idea! The idea with the portal forming at the tree was cool too! Awesome job! I really enjoyed reading this!

This fuc is just perrrfect!

Part two please?

I... I just have no words. This is so gorgeous I just want to read it over and over. Your masterful use of second person pov was excellent, drawing me deep into the story, and all your word choices, tone, voice, everything... I was seeing it right in front of me. I wish I had several more chapters of this instead of one, but I'll enjoy the one I have. Thank you for writing. Never give up.

This was a wonderful story. I got the sense of that Danny needs to be near a portals energy to maintain his ghost half- which is a head canon that I really like so it was near that it was incorporated. The two types of ghosts Norman & Danny encounter are very different, but the way you wrote them & their interactions made it believable that they could easily exist in the same universe.

Cool! Really cool!

that was amazing omg so favorited XD