This is really good. What age is Taylor here?

It's a good story, but this arc is becoming a bit long.
Eight chapters on the same combat, and we don't see the end yet.

I love this story and glad to see its back, hoping you post it again on SV.

It lives! Awesome!

An interesting story. Please continue it!

I'm surprised Icho Tolot isn't more frustrated with how childish half the Parahumans are acting who are involved in this fight. A group of individuals that apparently aren't even fully aware of any one elses capabilities vaguely working together hoping to accidentally kill or drive off an endbringer because they refuse to actually put in the effort to put together an actual offensive. They've been pulling teeth this whole story just to get a weapon or get people to actually help do something actually effective to damage their enemy.

Anyway I just found this because of the update, and it's always nice to see stories revived. I really enjoyed what I read, and I'm looking forward to the eventual fallout once the fight ends. If Icho doesn't let her transform immediately back, there might be a time where her parents think she's dead considering everyone else on the bus is.

Really glad you updated, will you be updating on spacebattle or sufficient velocity?
I am quite interested in the aftermath to everyone's reaction to Taylor and how Taylor would interact with Icho or use the form even her new cape friends Icho made for her.
Honestly the PRT would bend over backwards to accommodate her despite the issue of alien mind taking control.

long time no see

Terrible shame this is dead, really good fics

this has amazing HILARIOUS potential
also Flech almost peed herself xD

Definitely an interesting idea good job!

this is a pretty good story and thank you for introducing me to perry rhodan.

The dialogue in Lily's part feels off kinda like everyone's talking in the same strange medieval-ish way as Icho Tolot.

For example, the "At Last!" or the "Let's be gone." Lily says is just plain odd, no modern day teenager would really speak like that unless they're naturally over-dramatic or flamboyant, acting in a play, or just crazy. Something like "Finally" or "Let's go" would be more natural sounding coming from a teenager in the 2000's.

Great chapter, can't wait for more.

Glory Girl's protectiveness to her sister is great and all but now is not the time!

Oh wow! Icho Tolot is giving Panacea all the calculations! This is probably the fastest any fic has approached the morally grey aspects of Panacea's power in a healthy manner. Ignoring the blackmail.

Next time on One Force Girl: The Piggy-back Ride of the Century!