Reviews for Cravings
ErenTitanYeager chapter 1 . 8/19/2018
This is one of my favorite RWBY Enabler Fics. Please continue writing this when you get a chance to. It's just really awesome and amazing.
Rwbyfetishperson chapter 1 . 3/10/2018
So first off, I liked it. Considering the platform we're using, this is better than most. Technically speaking your writing is very good. The story progresses and it does so fluently. However I feel it suffers from a couple of things.
For example, there are a few cliche lines in the story that kind of remind me that I'm rewarding a fanfiction. I think the line was something like, ' it felt so wrong but felt so right.' There's nothing necessarily wrong with that, it just irked me somewhat.
Also, the way the sisters interacted felt a little too scripted for me. I realize this is smut and I'm definitely overanalyzing but bare with me. It seemed they were a little too eager to jump each other's bones, though admittedly it's probably written that way on purpose. What I mean is a little tension and a little build up goes a long way for a satisfying conclusion.
These things and a couple other minor infractions are all I've really got to complain about though. I'd also like to preface that I'm only critiquing what you wrote because I liked it. There's a definite charm to your style. Keep it up.
BetterTitles chapter 2 . 7/1/2017
There better be fuckin' more.
danielwalstow chapter 1 . 5/19/2017
Love this story
Cyberleader2000 chapter 2 . 4/29/2017
its a shame this is compleat as I want more
Lavits Dragoon chapter 2 . 12/14/2016
This is awesome! I could definitely see this becoming a full story! That would be amazing. So glad there is more! Never enough enabler! Keep fighting the good fight!
OBSERVER01 chapter 2 . 12/12/2016
hmmm... enabler! must have moar!
NyaNyaKittyFace chapter 2 . 12/12/2016
I kinda wish this was a full blown romance story with lemon instead of just a lemon story.
Ultimate Kuuga chapter 2 . 12/12/2016
Fucking awesome! You back!
Combatflaps chapter 2 . 12/12/2016
damn that's hot! hit me with the well written Enabler right when i need it
name chapter 1 . 12/11/2016
Yo this story is really good
Pearl Darkness chapter 2 . 12/11/2016
YES! I was hoping for more cravings can't wait to see more.
Crazy A.C.E Stan chapter 1 . 8/29/2016
What about the bread? OH NO! They waisted perfectly good cupcakes! Welp... At least they ate all the icing.
Little Liar chapter 1 . 5/20/2016
Not bad.
chasesama chapter 1 . 2/2/2016
I loved the writing style and it was very erotic.
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