This was hot. I remember reading it back when you first posted it but I didn't know it was you! So hot.

Ridiculously HOT.

This is really well paced. The smut was pretty jarring with your choice of words but I liked it since it added to the darkness and lack of rules.

I enjoyed how you managed to weave the concept of some sort of twisted, possessive and obsessive bond between them; almost a perverted and inverted reflection of their original feelings.

Well written piece. You should definitely write more. Not particularly of this story but just more in general x

Ohmygod I love this, I love this, I love this. Ease continue with it, they're so hot together and yet disturbing, dark, fascinating, love the way you've written them.

Did they just have anal sex? I wasn't sure if I read that part right. Wish the smut was longer. I loved how he said she was his.