Please continue this story it is very interesting

Another good chapter... though I wish you could update more frequently! In any case, good job!

Amazing story please update soon

I'm so glad you updated , i truly love your story ! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

Nice

i absolutly love this story

Very good story... Update soon!

Nice

I loved reading this! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

One hell of a chapter can't wait for your next

Damn... what a story. O.o

Good chapter again, keep it up.

I love this. I mean, seriously love this. Update soon!

I wanted to tell you I really like your story. One thing I have noticed is you use the term Vardens a lot it should just be the Varden. I have been working on a 5th book with a similar idea. This story is ment to tie up a lot of the open endedness of CP's conclusion it is mainly from Arya's POV. If it is ok with you I would like to use your term BORN RIDER. I have not started posting it yet because I wanted to be sure the story would come together. If you are interested I would like your opinion on it. I am going to start final editing on the first few chapters is a couple weeks while I am typing them up. If you would be interested in helping me I would appreciate your help. If you are interested please email me at . Again you have a great story going and I can't wait to read more.

Great story so far, its great to see some new AUs happening in this fandom so many are post book 4.

Oooo err. This is all confusing yet exciting stuff. :D So what does he mean by Second Rider... if Eragon I was the first Rider? Hmm.
Keep it up, great stuff.